I'll have to check into summarizing. I'd rather not start a new chapter with a summary
(This is a blog post
here.)
Generally, we want to start each new chapter with
(1) establishment of POV (if in 3rd limited)
(2) setting, and
(3) action that is happening
right now.
This is the triumverate of
Whose head am I in?
Where am I?
What's going on (and we want something going on even if it's trivial.)
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Hork was as fond of rodents as the next man. His sister raised prize-winning ROUXs back home--fine eating and and a soft, spinnable wool in the fall. But he didn't like the wild pygmy variety that scattered underfoot as they walked into The Willing Wench.
Here we have characters in motion, rather than static.
We know where we are.
We have identified the POV character for the chapter because we see his internals and he is the first identified character.
I like to go pretty fast to dialog. Just my preference. I like this first dialog to hold emotion about the scene at hand and to hint at the next problem.
"Why don't we just eat in a sewer and skip the middleman?" He followed Jeremy to a table in the arse end of the tavern, careful where he put his feet.
"You wanted skanky? I give you skanky." Jeremy brushed at the history of former meals that encrusted the table. Gave up. Sat on the bench. "Brytog will like this place."
"And we have to please Brytog."
"God help us, we do."
Okay. We are fifty or a hundred words into the scene and we have established action and time passing. At this point we can briefly ref stuff that happened elsewhen and elsewhere.
We mention only what is not obvious.
If our folks are warm and dry and last chapter they fell in a river, the reader will figure out they have changed clothing. If it is night and last chapter was noon, they know time has passed. If our folks walk off to their room at the inn, we don't need to say one of them rented a room earlier.
The backstory we add at this point is
(1) not bloody obvious,
(2) important, and
(3) related to the problem the characters are going to deal with.
Insofar as possible, we wrap the backstory stuff in terms of what will happen next.
Jeremy tapped the purse he wore at his belt. "I got three and six for the nag and eight for the tack. It won't be traced back to us. Spent all that on replacement arrows. I left them at the inn. You can complain about them later. The innkeep and the fletcher both say there's no werewolves in town. The Lythrops seem to be hiding or run off in disorder. Or dead."
"Maybe they ate here." Himself, he wasn't going to touch anything that came out of that kitchen, including the tavern wench headed their way.
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That example takes a bit of the past -- the sale of the horse -- and drags it into the story present time by saying 'we won't get caught'. That's a 'now' worry. Takes the sale money from the past and relates it to arrows that are at present time at the inn and will in the future time be examined. Takes the renting of an inn room from the past because it relates to the current problem with werewolves.
So it's less ,"I rented a room. Then I sold the horse. Then I ..."
Not so much, "This is what I did four hours ago and that is what I did next."
It's more, "When I rented a room there was no rumor of the princess coming through town,"
which brings the past action of room rental into a relationship with what they're worried about right now.