Cinquain Train

Rivana · Oct 27, 2006

Faithful
to the night life,
they fail to seize the day
But those who fall will rise again
stronger

Rivana · Oct 27, 2006

Hard won
is this our fate,
but the years are worth it
For all our troubles we will grow
stronger

Dee · Oct 27, 2006

Stronger
And stronger still
Says my soul in the night
Speaking of love for only you
Passion

Godfather · Oct 27, 2006

passion
red red red lips
mad curves, crazy, red dress
and the eyes, and the breasts, the a$s...
Don't Touch.

moblues · Oct 27, 2006

Don't touch
nor speak to me.
You'll never deserve me,
you will never break my stone heart.
Goodbye.

Godfather · Oct 28, 2006

goodbye
babylon, sing.
one guitar, one drumkit,
drowning in the blues they are the
black keys!

(check out the black keys - great band)

Rivana · Oct 28, 2006

black keys
lead to black hearts
you cannot open love
if you try to force yourself in
hate kills

aspier · Oct 28, 2006

poetinahat said:
Floodlights
Bathe shy faces
In a crude dazzle splash.
Frightened men hunch and wail, helpless.
Dogs bark.

This is good, Poetinhat. Not fun at all but diamond stuff. See what I mean?

(Pssst sorry that I don't participate ... I always falls out of the boat when I 'force' poetry!)

moblues · Oct 28, 2006

Hate kills
innocents die.
Gods play chess games
pawns march on to the promised land.
Gods lie.

Godfather · Oct 28, 2006

gods lie
and we just stand
hangin' around, cryin'
not much more we can do, always
cryin'

moblues · Oct 28, 2006

Cryin'
ain't never helped.
Spit, toil and motor oil
Is how I feed my family.
I failed.

moblues · Oct 28, 2006

I failed
the soil is burnt.
Mother earth laughs at me
I'd sell my soul to feed my kids.
Let me.

Edit. I can't believe I did the eight sylabble line twice. LOL

Dee · Oct 28, 2006

Let me
I beg of you
Bring you closer this night
And touch my skin against your skin
Lips meet

Godfather · Oct 29, 2006

lips meet,
and rain pours down
in a great dramatic
closing scene. pity nobodie's
like that

Dee · Oct 29, 2006

Like that
Like this and that
I'm tired of all the fuss
Style is always changing anyway
Who knows

Dee · Oct 29, 2006

Like that
Like this and that
I'm tired of all the fuss
Style is always changing anyway
Who knows

Ganesha · Oct 29, 2006

Who knows
what they may think
or when they wrote the thought
written with invisible ink
thoughtless

pconsidine · Oct 29, 2006

Thoughtless
action curses
us to relive mistakes
as if tomorrow counts for naught.
Fools reign.

moblues · Oct 29, 2006

Fools reign
angels waver.
Death takes a holiday
while Dante just sits back and laughs.
Who wins?

moblues · Oct 29, 2006

Who wins?
Forget your sins
I am here to save you.
God? He's only a pretender.
Love me.

Dee · Oct 29, 2006

Love me
I want to say
But it sounds so selfish
One should not have to ask these things
Ever

Ganesha · Oct 29, 2006

Ever
aft forever
followed by never aft
joie de vie- my eyes upon thee
joyous

poetinahat · Oct 29, 2006

joyous
you smell of soap
we eat cinnamon toast
measure the sunrise in coffee
kiss me

kborsden · Oct 29, 2006

kiss me
and make it quick
don't forget, mouth open
and slip your tongue between my lips
please do

moblues · Oct 29, 2006

Please do?
No please do not.
Who's life am I living?
I'm not here to amuse you, dear
Get lost.

Cinquain Train

Rivana

Walks in the shades.

Rivana

Walks in the shades.

Dee

Godfather

back door man

moblues

Godfather

back door man

Rivana

Walks in the shades.

aspier

moblues

Godfather

back door man

moblues

moblues

Dee

Godfather

back door man

Dee

Dee

Ganesha

con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist

pconsidine

Too Adorkable for Words

moblues

moblues

Dee

Ganesha

con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist

poetinahat

say it loud

kborsden

Has a few recurring issues

moblues