Punctuation question

MaxWriter

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[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]Is my use of comma/period appropriate here? I can't get my head around if the extra info tagged at the end of these sentences are appositives, independent clauses, or fragments.[/FONT]


[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]He doesn’t feel like a genius. He feels normal.[/FONT]


[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]The conference is not what he expects, more like a party.[/FONT]


[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]They said he drowned, but that can’t be possible. He was at work.[/FONT]
 
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Lines one and two are fine. The second sentences are independent clauses.

Line two, I think, is technically incorrect, but it reads perfectly fine. I'm not sure what grammatical role "more like a party" plays (it's not an appositive), so I can't be sure. But I believe it's a simple sentence fragment. You could add "it's" to make it "it's more like a party," and then make it its own sentence.

But it sounds natural as it is.
 

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Line two does not read well at all, and really makes no sense.
 

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The conference is not what he expected, it is more like a party. (now it is an independent clause, I think, as "it is more like a party" can stand on its own as a sentence.

"More like a party" is not sentence so it is not an independent clause. It's a dependent clause or subordinate clause, I believe, as it supplies additional information.
 

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[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]Is my use of comma/period appropriate here? I can't get my head around if the extra info tagged at the end of these sentences are appositives, independent clauses, or fragments.[/FONT]


[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]He doesn’t feel like a genius. He feels normal.[/FONT]


[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]The conference is not what he expects, more like a party.[/FONT]


[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]They said he drowned, but that can’t be possible. He was at work.[/FONT]

The first and third samples are grammatically correct; although I would question the logic in both, but that's another matter.

I believe that the second would be better, if "it is" was added, and the comma would have to be changed to a semicolon.
[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]The conference is not what he expects; it is more like a party.[/FONT]
 
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Thank you. It all helps.