This question just occurred to me as I was proofreading. I use the title phrase frequently, i.e.
Some random thoughts, Bill thought to himself. And emotions and stuff.
In the face of it, this is obviously redundant unless you have telepaths (Some random thoughts, Bill thought to Fred). But I've read the phrase in so many books that it's become natural to me -- so natural that when I remove the "to himself", it feels chopped.
So, is this the kind of thing that would make you do a WTF, or is it just part of the flow?
Some random thoughts, Bill thought to himself. And emotions and stuff.
In the face of it, this is obviously redundant unless you have telepaths (Some random thoughts, Bill thought to Fred). But I've read the phrase in so many books that it's become natural to me -- so natural that when I remove the "to himself", it feels chopped.
So, is this the kind of thing that would make you do a WTF, or is it just part of the flow?