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Hey all.
Just looking for a few opinions on this.
So I've cut about twenty odd pages in the middle of my story because I felt the pace slowed right down at this point. The characters have reached this major location and they needed to spend some time there figuring things out.
This location and this point in the story are quite crucial as several major plot points occur.
But as the plot points were discovered and as the one or two characters found out certain things they needed to find out, I felt I was lagging here for too long.
Problem is that I feel I've lost a bit of the intrigue and character/world building that took place in the pages I've lost.
So, my question is - where would you sit on this issue?
Would you lose intrigue and depth for better pacing? Or would you always choose to keep those things and let the pacing suffer a bit for twenty odd pages?
Just looking for a few opinions on this.
So I've cut about twenty odd pages in the middle of my story because I felt the pace slowed right down at this point. The characters have reached this major location and they needed to spend some time there figuring things out.
This location and this point in the story are quite crucial as several major plot points occur.
But as the plot points were discovered and as the one or two characters found out certain things they needed to find out, I felt I was lagging here for too long.
Problem is that I feel I've lost a bit of the intrigue and character/world building that took place in the pages I've lost.
So, my question is - where would you sit on this issue?
Would you lose intrigue and depth for better pacing? Or would you always choose to keep those things and let the pacing suffer a bit for twenty odd pages?