Hey guys, I started a superhero story that I intend to turn into a comic someday, but for now I'm simply trying to get the ideas out on paper and develop them.
I have the first 3 chapters up on DeviantArt right here:
http://0lucario0.deviantart.com/art/...-1-2-399958607
I'd really appreciate some feedback and some critiques, the story is not designed to be a book so I'm looking for more story and character based feedback, It'd be great to hear back from you guys!
(this story takes place in a fictional city with anthromorphic characters, meaning they are like animal people, so don't be surprised when you see text saying "he's a tiger" because he actually is, but I'm sure at this point I'm just babbling lol)
I have the first 3 chapters up on DeviantArt right here:
http://0lucario0.deviantart.com/art/...-1-2-399958607
I'd really appreciate some feedback and some critiques, the story is not designed to be a book so I'm looking for more story and character based feedback, It'd be great to hear back from you guys!
(this story takes place in a fictional city with anthromorphic characters, meaning they are like animal people, so don't be surprised when you see text saying "he's a tiger" because he actually is, but I'm sure at this point I'm just babbling lol)