Hi everyone,
I am looking for fellow writers to help me with a scene that I am currently editing.
The scene shows two women having a heated argument when one wants to persuade the other to end a relationship and the other refuses to be bullied, even though she agrees with some of the points that are presented by the first woman.
I want to show that both women are highly intelligent, but that the second is firmly in control when the first loses it a bit.
Mostly, I am looking for advice to help me make it as realistic as possible, as well as identifying great beats to keep the momentum going.
So if any of you like the idea of critiquing this and helping me identify areas that are good and areas for improvements, that would be great!
The genre is contemporary fiction, mostly aimed at women.
I am looking for fellow writers to help me with a scene that I am currently editing.
The scene shows two women having a heated argument when one wants to persuade the other to end a relationship and the other refuses to be bullied, even though she agrees with some of the points that are presented by the first woman.
I want to show that both women are highly intelligent, but that the second is firmly in control when the first loses it a bit.
Mostly, I am looking for advice to help me make it as realistic as possible, as well as identifying great beats to keep the momentum going.
So if any of you like the idea of critiquing this and helping me identify areas that are good and areas for improvements, that would be great!
The genre is contemporary fiction, mostly aimed at women.