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Seeking Mentor/Beta Reader, YA Scifi/Fantasy

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Alzarakh

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Hey all, first post and first ever attempt at a novel. So I'm sure you can see that I'm a total noob when it comes to any of this.

Seeking out a mentor/beta reader more than anything. Editing would be amazing too as I'm terrible at describing anything short of a "red brick" or "brown hair".

The first draft is done now and I ran it through MSWord to filter out big mistakes; then printed it off and skimmed through it by hand to make some more changes.

Here's some info that may be helpful:

Length: Approx 68000 words
Genre: Probably YA, Fantasy/Sci-fi
Setting: 22nd century, Canada, west coast. (Im aiming for a world where technology sputtered out and plateau-ed. They have fun toys but nothing too Sci-Fi like warp drives and things like that.)

Really uber short description:
Characters get "marked" by a godess and have to stop a nuclear war, inevitably the main character messes it up and becomes the most hated person in existence (even though it wasn't his fault) and uses his super-power-ish abilities from his "mark" to try and fix everything.

Aiming for it to be a series. I'll probably send out chapter one as it seems to be my weakest chapter and see what people can do with it. Any help would be great :)

Thanks!
 

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Silly question - if it's a chapter you're worrried about especially and you already know there are areas you're 'terrible' at - would a crit thread not be the first step? I'd be wary about betaing something where the author already knows some of it is far from the mark - 70k words is a big commitment, especially if it's needing editing as well?
 

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Welcome, Alzarahk!

You might want to go over to the New Members thread and introduce yourself to the community. You'll be welcomed with open arms and given a host of links that will help you navigate this huge forum.

Most online forums are like cocktail parties. Introduce yourself, mingle a bit and get to know your surroundings. Being a beta/mentor is a big time investment, and you're more likely to get results if you participate in the community first.

I hope you like it here at AW!
 

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Thanks for the responses.

Springs2: Very valid points there actually. I'll head over and see if anyone would want to do a critique/help with editing.

Mrsmig: Will do :)
 
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