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Life's shame
electric lights
in crystal chandeliers
plastic carpet on marble floors
billboards
 

Jayne

gift of reverie
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just lust
ever flows, a
renewable resource,
more cost-effective than propane
to burn.
 

CurtisPutnam

Tuning in on Life
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to burn
with gift of Life
dancing butterflies soar
against clouds near rain, in your heart
soul leaps
 

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Soul leaps

High notes explode

Waterfalls tumble, turn

Down dark, dank, ancient carved tunnels

Ying-yang
 

ddgryphon

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Myself,
I must wonder;
desperate I must beg
a soft glance, or some muttered words
from you.
 

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love me
tether my eyes
not windows but anchors
in a maelstrom of sinking souls
love you
 

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We dream
awake at night
remembering life's past
climbing every treacherous vine,
let's dance
 

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Let's dance,
shake and shimmy,
catch that beat booming by;
don't know if we can do it till
we try.
 

susanabra

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we try
until trying
becomes monotonous
becomes failure disguised within
begin
 

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Begin
ideas ignite
wrinkling, crackling,
animating mental powers
afire
 

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Afire
barrier reef
evergrowing, groaning
cagey colorful cut corals
oceans
 

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Emotions
inner turmoil
turning, churning, yearning
unforgiveable yesterdays
headache
 

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headache
stabbing, throbbing,
pinpricking razor sharp,
unyielding mystical darkness
heartache.
 

onestepp

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heartache
dripping, dribbling
gooey, gummy, mushy
stickey-ickey chocolate goo,
ice-cream
 

A. Hamilton

here for a minute...catch me?
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ice-cream
just one dribble
onto my waiting tongue
no point resisting, tomorrow
diet
 

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Diet,
counting, watching
beautifying, spacious,
feet lightly bouncing off the ground,
weightless.
 

Writer???

Because EYE said so!
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Noting worlds of pleasure
Treasure waiting within a touch
Caress
 

CurtisPutnam

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caress
finger linger
drawn out, curved in, stopped dead
apex of disire, near the mount, resists
release