My ex agent submitted my manuscript to four publishers in the fall. I believe they'd all be considered second-tier publishers. Good, well known, but not at the very top.
All four passed, but one editor read the whole manuscript and sent some positive notes "really intriguing premise", and she "enjoyed reading the manuscript", but she "didn't fall in love with it".
She also sent two pages of notes which I feel I've addressed pretty effectively.
So, the question is, do I include this information in a query, or should I bring it up with a prospective agent at a later stage, such as "the call"?
All four passed, but one editor read the whole manuscript and sent some positive notes "really intriguing premise", and she "enjoyed reading the manuscript", but she "didn't fall in love with it".
She also sent two pages of notes which I feel I've addressed pretty effectively.
So, the question is, do I include this information in a query, or should I bring it up with a prospective agent at a later stage, such as "the call"?