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I prefer the left
side of my brain, except when
it forgets to dance.
 

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It forgets to dance,
that right foot of mine; good thing
I have two left feet.
 

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I have two left feet
performance transformation
danced upon Dad's feet
 

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Danced upon Dad's feet,
small bare toes on leather shoe,
dreaming a lifetime.
 

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JT, “Before I go to sleep,” has six syllables. I tried to figure a way to keep most of your words, but couldn’t, so I tried to capture the mood you set.

Preparing for bed
with fall nights now winter cold—
the fire needs tending.
 

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The fire needs tending,
embers low, your love letters
no good even now.
 

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Love rings hollow, dear,
when it is mostly conveyed
through text messages.
 

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On economics
I have no wit; ask me of
death, none else is left.
 

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Death, none else is left.
You've been faithful to the end,
my dark, lonely friend.
 

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My dark, lonely friend
who feels lost in the shadows --
be your own sunshine.
 

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Are more to be made?
I liked this blue-white planet,
but it's gone all off.
 

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but it's gone all off,
rancid milk, a smelly fish,
the wilted lettuce
 

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The wilted lettuce
is the crowning touch in your
vile mental sandwich.
 

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vile mental sandwich --
hypocrisy and deceit
wrapped in bigotry
 

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"...And ruined my life!"
Your last words. And yet I did
nothing but love you.
 

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Of every good-bye
we've said to one another,
this one is for real.