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I have worked really hard on my latest story. I love the idea of it. I love the characters. The plot is interesting. But for some reason it's not coming together. And I can't figure out why.
I know without reading it that you can't tell me what might not be working, but do you guys have any tips for figuring out the problems in your short stories when they don't seem obvious? I will be workshopping this story in school, but I always workshop stories that I feel are my best work. This it not it. I keep trying to figure out what's wrong, but I am failing to see any real problems other than it just seems off for some reason.
Has this ever happened to any of you? What did you do about it? How can you train yourself to spot and fix problems in your own writing?
I know without reading it that you can't tell me what might not be working, but do you guys have any tips for figuring out the problems in your short stories when they don't seem obvious? I will be workshopping this story in school, but I always workshop stories that I feel are my best work. This it not it. I keep trying to figure out what's wrong, but I am failing to see any real problems other than it just seems off for some reason.
Has this ever happened to any of you? What did you do about it? How can you train yourself to spot and fix problems in your own writing?