Due to a family funeral out of state and a hotel without free internet, I have one-count-'em-one day to complete my line edits, accepting or rejecting each change. The line editor is new to me, not the same one I had last time at this publisher, and she seems quite good, catching lots of things neither I nor my editor did. (Which is, of course, her job, for which she seems more than qualified.)
I'm virtually done except for a few corrections I don't really want to make. I don't want to reject any without being able to say why. ("I don't like it!" seems insufficient.) Though you will surely be tempted, please don't suggest I rewrite the sentences. That's a bigger deal than it seems, at this stage.
In each of these, can you tell me whether the comma is necessary or optional? If you can cite the Chicago Manual to back your claim, you get bonus points.
1. We talked and laughed so much[,] our meals were half-eaten when the wine was gone. (Comma, yes or no, and why?)
2. I talked to Holly about cutting classes while the school looked the other way[,] because she rocked the theater arts department even though other actors’ kids went to the same school. (Comma, yes or no, and why?)
3. Just because a thought occurs[,] doesn’t mean you need to share it. (Comma, yes or no, and why?)
Maryn, able to see the finish line now
I'm virtually done except for a few corrections I don't really want to make. I don't want to reject any without being able to say why. ("I don't like it!" seems insufficient.) Though you will surely be tempted, please don't suggest I rewrite the sentences. That's a bigger deal than it seems, at this stage.
In each of these, can you tell me whether the comma is necessary or optional? If you can cite the Chicago Manual to back your claim, you get bonus points.
1. We talked and laughed so much[,] our meals were half-eaten when the wine was gone. (Comma, yes or no, and why?)
2. I talked to Holly about cutting classes while the school looked the other way[,] because she rocked the theater arts department even though other actors’ kids went to the same school. (Comma, yes or no, and why?)
3. Just because a thought occurs[,] doesn’t mean you need to share it. (Comma, yes or no, and why?)
Maryn, able to see the finish line now