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metallic by day
sunrise, sunset, pastel bright
pearly oceans wave.
 

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watching birds in trees
kisses and love I give you
For you are my doll
 

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Drop by drop it wanes
Did I use a wrong word? No.
Wane feeds my soul. Yes.
 

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la corpsse deux
skullduggery ditched moonbeams
seasons danse le morte.
 

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Date with a cheapskate
But I love him, the ghost, so much!
He needs a job though
 

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So his brain can stop
He is a silly soul and...
well, he just likes to eat.
 

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he just likes to eat
unsheathed claws grip cooling flesh
predator gorges
 

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on human liver pâté
pass the crackers please
 

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Anonyouth - you have a structure of 5,8,4 (syllables per line) here - we use a 5,7,5 structure for this thread. I'm going to pick up Kate's last line and try again.

And not enough wine -
Never enough wine, she said,
And far too much cheese!
 

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"and far too much cheese,"
said the gross overweight mouse
"where is my treadmill?"