I'm on my third draft of my short story (about 4k words) and I would really like an outside opinion for my revisions. I'm mostly looking for a general impression and comments on anything that isn't working.
I'll ready just about anything and I'm pretty good at getting comments back in a timely manner, so message me if you want to swap stories.
EDIT: I forgot to mention that it does have graphic sex somewhere in the middle of it, but if you're not interested in reading that, I can just blot it out and you can tell me your impression of the rest of it, sex aside.
I'll ready just about anything and I'm pretty good at getting comments back in a timely manner, so message me if you want to swap stories.
EDIT: I forgot to mention that it does have graphic sex somewhere in the middle of it, but if you're not interested in reading that, I can just blot it out and you can tell me your impression of the rest of it, sex aside.
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