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Looking for a beta reader for erotic(ish) short story (happy to swap!)

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HannahWing

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I'm on my third draft of my short story (about 4k words) and I would really like an outside opinion for my revisions. I'm mostly looking for a general impression and comments on anything that isn't working.

I'll ready just about anything and I'm pretty good at getting comments back in a timely manner, so message me if you want to swap stories.

EDIT: I forgot to mention that it does have graphic sex somewhere in the middle of it, but if you're not interested in reading that, I can just blot it out and you can tell me your impression of the rest of it, sex aside.
 
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