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My new MMC is kind of aloof but when I re-read what I have written, I am afraid I am backing myself in to "He's creepy." corner. I think maybe I need to let him interact with characters other than the MFC so that more of his real personality can come out. He is trying to remain calm and in control of his feelings for her but knows he is in big trouble. He is somewhat soft-spoken around her and very matter-of-fact. When he is around his best friend, he is witty, funny, a realist and a bit sarcastic.
I guess my question is- how can I portray someone AS aloof and NOT creepy/jerk-like while preserving his well, reservations? Can you give an example?
Thanks!
I guess my question is- how can I portray someone AS aloof and NOT creepy/jerk-like while preserving his well, reservations? Can you give an example?
Thanks!