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Hi all,
I'm after some thoughts about what you think of a serial switching from MC 1st person in the first book, to 3rd person and or multiply 1st persons in the 2nd book.
It's a 3 part monster erotica series. Each part is roughly 10k words.
For the first 'book' it's all told in 1st person from the pov of the MC.
In the second 'book' I've found that I've switched to 3rd person for some parts. In other parts it told from the MC's pov, her friend's pov as well the monster's pov in others parts.
So I guess my question is, as a reader would the switching pov's throw you off? (MC, friends, monster)
And the same question in regards to having some of it written in 3rd person?
Have any other serials of this length done something similar or have they all stuck to the one pov choice?
I'm after some thoughts about what you think of a serial switching from MC 1st person in the first book, to 3rd person and or multiply 1st persons in the 2nd book.
It's a 3 part monster erotica series. Each part is roughly 10k words.
For the first 'book' it's all told in 1st person from the pov of the MC.
In the second 'book' I've found that I've switched to 3rd person for some parts. In other parts it told from the MC's pov, her friend's pov as well the monster's pov in others parts.
So I guess my question is, as a reader would the switching pov's throw you off? (MC, friends, monster)
And the same question in regards to having some of it written in 3rd person?
Have any other serials of this length done something similar or have they all stuck to the one pov choice?