Cinquain Train

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I wait
thinking moving
quickly hastily
unsure of what is to become
the end
 

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the end
is approaching
while the world parties on
oblivious, their decadence
revealed
 

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Then dies
directed, defined
staggering lethargically tired
bright colored universe faded
an end
 

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an end
desperation
satisfied, final rest
upon a velvet tapestry
below
 

Poppy

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Daylight
comes, I ask you
where they go when the sun
comes out. . .where did they go, all those
fireflies?
 

Poppy

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faint glow
in my blue eyes
as the Lortab begins
to take effect on acute pain--
toothache

(I have a toothache today, but I also have Lortab, lol)
 

Poppy

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Toothache
is gone at last.
Now maybe I can write
a cinquain that will make more sense--
maybe.
 

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maybe
unread, undone
slowly justify bout
timeless procrastination spent
thinking
 

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Obsessed
bewitched, gripped, held
unruly fixation
abnormally preoccupied
haunted
 

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Stop me
started, thinking
invigorating moves
stimulating intelligence
going
 

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memior
yearning, longing
lovely, delightful, quaint
life's pages doodles one's desires
yard line
 

Polly

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Strangers,
bereft of speech
across cooling coffee.
Once inseparable, now hid in
newsprint.