So, as I have noted in other threads, I am in the middle of revising a novel, my first (at this rate, my only).
I have (tonight) two questions. My first concerns backstory. My MC does have a past romance with the love interest (who does not come into it until maybe mid way through). Also, she has specific memories of how her husband died (and why she feels responsible), and of a particularly traumatic incident with fire (thanks to all the awesome experts here on AW). I have MC tell her best friend about the romance, tell her shrink about the death of her husband, and tell her love interest about the fire.
But.
I do it in italics and in past tense (the book - so far - is in first present, which I know is problemetic but so far has worked, not wedded to it though!) Is that a viable strategy or distracting? There are four in the novel.
Also (and this was rather disheartening but likely a good thing, not sure yet), I discovered (after hours and hours and hours and hours of this revision) that there is a midpoint scene of my book which might work up front. Midway through the book, the MC takes off to find her own answers. I tried starting the book (which is totally chronological) with the scene with her fleeing with her dog from the police through the rain to a hay barn. Then I have a page that says One Month Earlier and start the book where I had it. That feels a little gimmicky? i'm sure I have read great books that do this but I can't think of any!!
I HAD had a two paragraph prologue to set the story clearly in NW Montana. So that would get dumped (likely no loss) for this new start.
I will say after this revision process my "new" novel barely ressembles the old one (I plan on getting much better at it!)
Any thoughts on back story or starting with an event that happens farther in then going back to the story..greatly appreciated!
I have (tonight) two questions. My first concerns backstory. My MC does have a past romance with the love interest (who does not come into it until maybe mid way through). Also, she has specific memories of how her husband died (and why she feels responsible), and of a particularly traumatic incident with fire (thanks to all the awesome experts here on AW). I have MC tell her best friend about the romance, tell her shrink about the death of her husband, and tell her love interest about the fire.
But.
I do it in italics and in past tense (the book - so far - is in first present, which I know is problemetic but so far has worked, not wedded to it though!) Is that a viable strategy or distracting? There are four in the novel.
Also (and this was rather disheartening but likely a good thing, not sure yet), I discovered (after hours and hours and hours and hours of this revision) that there is a midpoint scene of my book which might work up front. Midway through the book, the MC takes off to find her own answers. I tried starting the book (which is totally chronological) with the scene with her fleeing with her dog from the police through the rain to a hay barn. Then I have a page that says One Month Earlier and start the book where I had it. That feels a little gimmicky? i'm sure I have read great books that do this but I can't think of any!!
I HAD had a two paragraph prologue to set the story clearly in NW Montana. So that would get dumped (likely no loss) for this new start.
I will say after this revision process my "new" novel barely ressembles the old one (I plan on getting much better at it!)
Any thoughts on back story or starting with an event that happens farther in then going back to the story..greatly appreciated!