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I'm in editing mode at the moment. Going through my completed MS, I see a lot of repeated words.
'Said' I mean to do. I know that one is invisible enough, and I prefer it to trying to find other ways of expressing that. When I use a 'yell' or 'whisper' etc, it is rare and I hope therefore stronger.
My question is, how invisible are words like 'walk', 'smile', and 'point'. I see a lot of them in my writing and I wonder if I should try to be more clever with substitutes.
I realise this is a general question that is hard to answer without seeing the manuscript, but I wonder if anyone else has the same concern.
'Said' I mean to do. I know that one is invisible enough, and I prefer it to trying to find other ways of expressing that. When I use a 'yell' or 'whisper' etc, it is rare and I hope therefore stronger.
My question is, how invisible are words like 'walk', 'smile', and 'point'. I see a lot of them in my writing and I wonder if I should try to be more clever with substitutes.
I realise this is a general question that is hard to answer without seeing the manuscript, but I wonder if anyone else has the same concern.