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This isn't exactly a 'general question,' but I couldn't find a better place to put it, so I put it here.
I'm writing a steampunk novel told in third person, following a truly emotionless automaton. I want to tell the story in a voice that matches the character, because halfway through the book, the automaton 'snaps' into emotions, and I want to show the contrast between the character at the beginning and ending through the voice, whether or not it's in first person. My goal is to keep readers interested by showing an unbiased view of other characters, and making their personalities clear and interesting, but my real problem is that I'm not sure how to write 'mechanically' and without emotion, while both keeping the reader relating to the automaton, and keeping the writing fluid. In fact, I'm not even entirely sure how I'm going to obviously write without emotion. Any help with this would be appreciated, including how to analyze your writing voice-- I'm looking for a very specific voice for this book, but it's hard to put my finger on exactly what I want. Thanks!
I'm writing a steampunk novel told in third person, following a truly emotionless automaton. I want to tell the story in a voice that matches the character, because halfway through the book, the automaton 'snaps' into emotions, and I want to show the contrast between the character at the beginning and ending through the voice, whether or not it's in first person. My goal is to keep readers interested by showing an unbiased view of other characters, and making their personalities clear and interesting, but my real problem is that I'm not sure how to write 'mechanically' and without emotion, while both keeping the reader relating to the automaton, and keeping the writing fluid. In fact, I'm not even entirely sure how I'm going to obviously write without emotion. Any help with this would be appreciated, including how to analyze your writing voice-- I'm looking for a very specific voice for this book, but it's hard to put my finger on exactly what I want. Thanks!