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Old 05-06-2008, 01:35 AM   #1
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Hi All! I usually hang out in the non-fiction forum or more often, in the freelance forum. But I also write for children. I have a manuscript for an early chapter book that I've been sitting on for quite some time. I sent it out to publishers several years ago to no avail...but I've learned SO much since then. My goal this month is to get it out there to publishers/agents.

Anyway- just wanted to report a little of my frustration. I just spent my morning editing my book. I was half-way there when I realized it was the WRONG one! Oh brother. That's what happens when you try all kinds of different versions for the same book; first person, third person, picture book, chapter book, etc.

I thought I had the right one but then realized this was the version where after writing it I realized it was really several books. So I wrote a smaller, simpler, more focused version...that's the one I SHOULD have been editing. Dang! What a waste of time. The good news is that the actual version I SHOULD have been working on was already mostly complete and ready to go.

Anyway- I'm sure no one can relate, as this is for sure, a "Karen-thing." (never heard of anyone making this kind of mistake before) But I feel better just pretending you all know how I feel. Sheesh! THanks for listening. ~Karen
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Old 05-06-2008, 02:29 AM   #2
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I have got into terrible muddles with mss because I tend to label them optimistic things like 'final' when they are no where near. I think the sensible thing is to number them, but I rarely do I tend to call them things like 'marversion' or 'newnewlily' so still get confused.
I usually call my submission version 'submission version' which helps a little...
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LOL...glad I'm not the only one. The funny thing is that because of previous problems like this, I very smartly labeled the one I *should* have been working on with the name of the book and then "Book One." That should have been my clue, but it didn't work. I don't know. I haven't had the heart to go back to it yet. So frustrating. I may go get groceries and start dinner before going back to work on it. Thanks for the response. ~Karen
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Oh, I've done this before, so don't feel bad! I save a copy every time I make changes, so that if I want to, I can go back to a previous copy and see what I had written. This results in sometimes a dozen docs with similar names. At the time, I remember which one is the latest and greatest, but when I switch projects...aaaaahhhh!

Now I use the hover feature to see when they were last altered. This way I can see which one was the most recently worked on.
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Ah, good to know! I don't save each and every one, but I've considered it. I thought I'd get too confused, but now I realize I was confused anyway. Oh well. ~Karen
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Anyway- I'm sure no one can relate, as this is for sure, a "Karen-thing." (never heard of anyone making this kind of mistake before) But I feel better just pretending you all know how I feel. Sheesh! THanks for listening. ~Karen
LOL I've done that before. That's why all my drafts have nice labels now.

EXAMPLE:
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Red_draft_1.1 (edited when it wasn't completed)
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Old 05-08-2008, 02:48 AM   #7
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Wow. That hurts my brain, just looking at your list. ~Karen
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Haha I've done this. I wrote one of my, now chapter books as, short story, then, chapter book, then easy reader, then chapter book. I have so many revisions and my computer sent everything in funny places when I did a, defrag and disk clean. Now I will put dates on everything.

After so many re writes and it still isn't right. I've decided to leave it for a while and I've started another one.

Does anyone else have the problem that when you do so many re writes that you don't know what chapter you're in any more? or is it just me?

I sympathize Lavinia.
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Old 05-18-2008, 08:03 PM   #10
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I do that as well. I date my novel updates so that cuts down on some of the confusion but I still find myself working on an old version if I forget and start on the laptop instead of the big boy.

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Old 05-20-2008, 11:32 PM   #11
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I have found that putting the date on each of my versions I save as back up definately helps me to identify WHICH one I should be working on, and which one I want to go back to if there's something I've re-written, but want to see how it was originally written.
(i.e. Someone Left To Love 5-17-08)

And I keep my files seperated. I have the actual MS I'm supposed to be working on by itself in it's own file, seperate from everything else, so when I send it out to Beta Readers, I know for sure I'm sending them the right version.

This has helped me a ton in staying organized.
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