Main character's name is Jacob.
Anyways, here's my thoughts (POST CONTAINS SPOILERS):
I thought the author was pretty good with details. For example, in the beginning there was a sentence that really struck out at me, something that I never thought about before, but could immediately envision in my head. And that was the first girl he was "in love" with (Catherine maybe? Can't remember her name) was left handed. And he noticed that because she was left handed and writing in pencil that she had smudge marks all the way up her arm. i thought that was a really cool detail.
The second thing I was impressed with was just how well this female author was able to capture the male mind and write a male character. Most of the time when authors try to do this, they only get it about halfway write, but this was a case where I'm seriously questioning whether the author is truly a woman. lol She understands the male mind pretty well, and she captured that nicely.
The story itself was interesting. I was able to to read it in like 3 sittings, so it was a decent enough story to keep me hooked. There were some boring parts here and there, and the beginning seemed a little shaky for me.
The biggest part about what I didn't like was that the story was fairly predictable. I mean, I knew as soon as Marlena told Jacob to put the elephant in the tent that that was going to be the thing that made August flip out and accuse them of having an affair.
I was really sad to hear that they through Camel overboard. I didn't give much a shit about Kinko. His transformation was way to fast for me. It was like one moment he hated Jacob and the next moment he was like his best friend until the end of time.
Finally, I was impressed that the author actually let Jacob and Marlena end up together. It was the only thing about the story that I didn't see coming. This story had unrequited love written all over it. Or the death of the girl. It was really nice to see the relationship work out for a change.
All in all, it was a decent read. I'd recommend it to people and maybe give it like a 3.5 out 5.