Below is how I punctuated a sentence in my upcoming novel. Comments, questions, criticisms? Sometimes commas drive me crazy.
She went to him; she draped her arms about his neck; she kissed him; after which she slid the bolt aside, opened the door, and smiling the sweetest she knew how, shut it tight behind her.
She went to him; she draped her arms about his neck; she kissed him; after which she slid the bolt aside, opened the door, and smiling the sweetest she knew how, shut it tight behind her.
