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Abnormal Romance Author
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Omahabad, Nebraskastan
Posts: 17,862
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Wait...that's a bad thing? Uh oh...
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Lori Website * Blog * Twitter AW Library: Lauren Gallagher * L. A. Witt In-Progress: Enjoy the Silence - 12,085 / 25,000 Peer Review - 6,513 / 75,000 If It Drives (w/Aleksandr Voinov) - 38,082 / 75,000 The Only One Who Matters (w/Cat Grant) - 2,201 / 75,000 Finding Master Right - Available June 17th! |
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Dream Killer
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Middle of Nowhere, Utah
Posts: 11,535
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I only do that some of the time.
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Protecting Teddy with all my might.
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Here. Now.
Posts: 654
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Jerry Phoenix you are not alone. My characters do that too. It's like they can't see anything without turning first.
I describe some characters a bit when they first show up, and others not so much. When the editing day of reckoning comes it will be a busy one. I abuse adverbs. There. I've said it.
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Abnormal Romance Author
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Omahabad, Nebraskastan
Posts: 17,862
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Don't you think you're being just a LITTLE melodramatic about it? I mean, c'mon. Explode?
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Lori Website * Blog * Twitter AW Library: Lauren Gallagher * L. A. Witt In-Progress: Enjoy the Silence - 12,085 / 25,000 Peer Review - 6,513 / 75,000 If It Drives (w/Aleksandr Voinov) - 38,082 / 75,000 The Only One Who Matters (w/Cat Grant) - 2,201 / 75,000 Finding Master Right - Available June 17th! |
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The grad students did it
Join Date: Apr 2005
Posts: 9,069
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I am the most wishy-washy writer around. I use any technique that gets me to finish my stories. That means on a background of writing mostly organically, I can throw a little outlining in on chapter twelve to get over a sticky point. It means I choose exceptions to writing "conventions" when they best serve the story, but not just because I can (and other writers do it). And as pure heresy to organic writing, I think a scene through before I sit down to write it--I come to the keyboard prepared to write that scene. Then I turn around and betray that organization by letting the scene find it's own path within and even beyond that original framwork. I am both this and that, and everything in between. I am whole-brained (not right or left). And I am unashamed of my vacillating ways because my goal is to finish the stories, not to get all tied up about how I finish them.
I had to push the edit button to edit this message, to add that I edit as I go (!), even though such an editing practice seems to be some sort of poison-tipped arrow around here.
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Phoenix (Historical - 2006)First Place, 2007 Arizona Authors Assoc. Book Awards Whiskey Creek Press Something Bad (Horror - 2007) Medallion Press. Silver Medal, 2008 IPPY awards, Horror category Rollicking Anthropomorphisms (Poetry Collection - 2008) 2009 EPPIE Award Finalist Whiskey Creek Press Agnes Hahn (Psychological Suspense 2008) Medallion Press Silver Medal, 2009 IPPY awards, Horror category Imola (Sequel to Agnes Hahn 2009) - Medallion Press 3.99 (Psychological Suspense/Mystery 2012) - Musa Last edited by NeuroFizz; 06-18-2009 at 07:35 PM. |
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not as sweet as you think
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: in a chilly place
Posts: 6,001
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I use adjectives instead of adverbs.
Sentence fragments. (Which also leads to semi-colon abuse.) Lack of dialogue tags. (Replace 'em with action descriptors as much as possible.) And I make up words like nobody's business.
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Editing
Join Date: May 2009
Location: UK
Posts: 289
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![]() Kath who edits as she writes, uses that far too much and procrastinates. |
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Has anyone seen mah bunniez?
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: doesn't play well with others
Posts: 8,609
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run-on sentences.
My Beta reader once counted 52 words in one sentence...I'm channeling Marcel Proust. Commas, bless 'em, I'm addicted. Adverbs, although I'm slowly weaning myself off them.
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Just a Fairy Princess
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Enchanted Forest and/or editing cave
Posts: 23,900
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I just want you all to know, I am silently judging you...
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Prodigiously Hanged
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Dallas
Posts: 11,521
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According to nearly all the critters I've had, I don't use enough commas.
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bananaed
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: oontz oontz oontz oontz
Posts: 7,238
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1. I edit as I go, mostly in my head. Thankfully, I've learned to lay off the Delete key once I've typed the words in.
2. I use "just," "that," and adverbs too much. 3. I start the next paragraph before I finish the one I'm working on. I tend to skip ahead one or two paragraphs, never more than that, then go backward. If my writing progress were a piece of yarn, it would be crocheted. 4. I'm compulsive about updating my word count in my sig (like every 50 words).
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It's smaller on the outside!
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Travelling around in my TARDIS.
Posts: 11,655
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Hi Lori. Don't worry, you're not alone!
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You Lie!
Join Date: Jun 2009
Posts: 725
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Grinning
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Pittsburgh
Posts: 545
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I edit it as I go too. I can't help it.
I'm also addicted to sentence fragments. I start too many sentences with "And" and "But." Pages delights in telling me that this is INFORMAL. And WRONG. Pages is wrong. |
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You Lie!
Join Date: Jun 2009
Posts: 725
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I use and and (and and and) but quite a bit myself. Having read lots of books that sold millions of copies while doing the same thing makes me stubborn.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Charleston, WV
Posts: 317
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Um, yeah. Big time. So... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori, Hi Lori! (BTW, thanks for doing all the hard work on these, Ken!) |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: My own private Ida-hell
Posts: 318
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I finish a chapter and then go back and edit it before moving on. Only once though...I promise!
I totally use adverbs. (sticks out tongue). I'll fix 'em in post! I use italics like they're going out of style. The elipse is my friend... So, when can I expect my flogging?
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Weaver of Dark Delusions
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Where madness sleeps, and dreams
Posts: 3,554
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I write completely out of order. I've been known to not just jump from chapter to chapter within a single book, but also to jump from book to book within a single writing session.
I also edit as I write. Why not? Saves me work later. I frequently describe characters when I introduce them. Nothing else makes sense. I have one book that opens with dialogue. I sometimes use more than one POV in a single scene. I seem to use more description than most people on AW say I should, and yet my writing is sparser than 90% of the published fantasy authors I read.
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You Lie!
Join Date: Jun 2009
Posts: 725
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He also wrote 15,000 words a day, so he can just go kill himself as far as I'm concerned. >:( |
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Whatever I did, I didn't do it.
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Providence, RI
Posts: 8,335
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I annoy my betas by being perfect in the first draft.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Charleston, WV
Posts: 317
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Likes it rough
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: The Place With Lots Of Rain
Posts: 229
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I make grammar errors, even though I know all the rules etc.
I write my fast-paced action scenes in streams of run-on sentences and no paragraphs and sometimes not even spaces between the damn words because I get caught up in them (which is a pain to fix later). |
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Dream Killer
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Middle of Nowhere, Utah
Posts: 11,535
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"Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid." — Albert Einstein I helped write this!!!!http://www.ibnbattuta.tv/ |
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You Lie!
Join Date: Jun 2009
Posts: 725
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Wow, I must suck. I pretty much have as much time as I want, but I still only average about 2,000 a day. Maybe I'm just too picky.
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