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Old 03-18-2011, 05:22 AM   #14601
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14601 -- 5k words is about the sized world I can manage, hee hee, for now
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14602. Any chance of a peek on SYW when it's ready?
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14604. We're lovely. Reeeeaallly
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14605. 5K words might be a bit much for SYW, but even a snippet will be treated with the loving care it deserves.

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14607 -- maybe a tidbit, when it's polished, because what I have now is "in the rough" heehee
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14608 *Yearns for the day when I can yearn for those days of first-draft innocence *
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14609. KellyA, I'd gladly give you pages to rewrite. I have no enthusiasm for this but it HAS to be done.
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14610. Editing. I hate this part.
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14611 ...and then there's Don... LOL!
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14613. What did I do?
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14616 Don ran off and got published, lol!
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14617 ...but it's okay, he's still Don! =)
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14618. Put on your hip waders, Storyteller. You will be hip-deep in rewrites at some point. And good evening.
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14620. I do more editing to my posts here than I do to my novella
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14621 This is the hardest part ever, I need to weave these two large pieces of this novel together while cutting... and keeping the time line coherent...
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14722 I swear, there comes a time after edit #six zillion five hundred and two, that nothing you have written looks any good...
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14623 If there is anyone who can do it, it's you.
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