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Old 10-29-2009, 02:17 AM   #8501
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Hey guys. I was thinking about entering Mary Kole's contest and I was wondering if you could give me help on a title for LYING 101. I'd been thinking about changing it for awhile.

Lying 101 (the original, of course)
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I sort of like the third one but it may be too long (I don't know if there's any sort of golden rule regarding title length but it looks like it might be a lot to fit on a spine).

My personal preference, though, is for the original.
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Old 10-29-2009, 02:19 AM   #8502
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Watching Pride and Prejudice again (Kiera Knightly version). Please someone sneak in and erase this from my DVR. Please?

That's my favorite, so I wouldn't be any help.
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Ugh. I need a kick in the @ss.
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I like all of them. What if you cut # 3 to just Secrets & Lies?

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Ugh. I need a kick in the @ss.
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What'd I just kick you for?
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I like all of them. What if you cut # 3 to just Secrets & Lies?



*kicks*

What'd I just kick you for?
Surfing and dithering instead of working.
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Surfing and dithering instead of working.

*tsks*

Eh, it's good to give your brain a rest every now and then.
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Awesome!
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I think Hemlock may have a new theme song. Aimee Mann's cover of The Scientist: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XKAik-3zkEI

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Hound should be please. No references to placentas :p
Lol. And I love how everyone just ignores my warped and perverted comments. You all must be immune to them by now.
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That's a list of all the "ly" words (not counting probably, really, etc) in the first 20 pages.

Just to make y'all feel better.
OOoh - I'm pretty sure that in my first WIP that would be the list from the first 2 pages. That is up for some serious editing.... someday.

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You'll have to get in line behind me if that's the criteria for butt kicking. I made a cake... and now I'm sitting on the couch watching Ghostbusters with the big kid. We'll see how she sleeps!
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I am still laughing so was unable to comment or respond... love it!
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Lol. And I love how everyone just ignores my warped and perverted comments. You all must be immune to them by now.
I'm just trying to repress any Joss-like comments.
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Is it bad if one of my male characters breaks down and sobs after killing someone? It's not terribly unmanly given the circumstances, surely.
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Lol. And I love how everyone just ignores my warped and perverted comments. You all must be immune to them by now.
Everything but "meh".

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Is it bad if one of my male characters breaks down and sobs after killing someone? It's not terribly unmanly given the circumstances, surely.
If his feelings toward this person he killed were malicious in nature, then I wouldn't let him cry. If it was an accident or something that needed to be done, and deep down he didn't really want to do it, then I could see him having a breakdown.
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Everything but "meh".



If his feelings toward this person he killed were malicious in nature, then I wouldn't let him cry. If it was an accident or something that needed to be done, and deep down he didn't really want to do it, then I could see him having a breakdown.
Thanks. Not an accident but definitely not something he would have ever seen himself doing.
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OMG, no! Logan in Veronica Mars breaks down on numerous occasions, and he's a pretty tough cookie most of the time. It makes the breakdowns that much more heartbreaking, IMO. *Love* it.

So, has anyone who's read some of DG for me also watched Veronica Mars? Just checking....
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OMG, no! Logan in Veronica Mars breaks down on numerous occasions, and he's a pretty tough cookie most of the time. It makes the breakdowns that much more heartbreaking, IMO. *Love* it.

So, has anyone who's read some of DG for me also watched Veronica Mars? Just checking....
Nope. Always meant to get to it but never quite did.
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As for the perverted responses, I've been vaccinated and immune after nine years of teaching teenagers!!!!

I did chuckle though!! LOL I normally don't like writing "chuckled" but after rereading New Moon, I'm chuckling right along!!!
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Way to go Kate!

How'd you get the Cool Aid dude? LOL

Everytime I see it I think of Dane Cook's thing about being scared of the Cool Aid guy as a kid and how he would burst through a wall instead of using a door, lol.
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*skips in* Sorry to interrupt, but...Jump is DONE!
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Edit: Also congrats to Kate on 2nd draft
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