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Old 05-01-2011, 05:05 AM   #6001
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Old 05-01-2011, 05:33 AM   #6002
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TWO RHYMES / RUMORS, WAR DETEE

1. TV writer & producer / One of several series for which he wrote and produced.
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Old 05-01-2011, 05:47 AM   #6003
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Could you give me a clue such as the name of the writer and/or the series he produced?
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Old 05-01-2011, 05:51 AM   #6004
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Could you give me a clue such as the name of the writer and/or the series he produced?
No, but I'll give you a second clue, which is practically a giveaway if you figure it out.

TWO RHYMES / RUMORS, WAR DETEE

1. TV writer & producer / One of several series for which he wrote and produced.
2. The writer-producer has the same name as a very famous fictional character.
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Old 05-01-2011, 10:27 AM   #6005
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1. TV writer & producer / One of several series for which he wrote and produced.
2. The writer-producer has the same name as a very famous fictional character.
3. The writer-producer has worked on several TV series, but he has worked on the one in the scramble more than any other.
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Old 05-01-2011, 08:13 PM   #6006
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Old 05-01-2011, 08:22 PM   #6007
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Old 05-01-2011, 08:58 PM   #6008
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Old 05-02-2011, 04:23 AM   #6009
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1) Character in a movie who shares a famous name / the movie
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Old 05-02-2011, 06:32 AM   #6010
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Old 05-02-2011, 06:32 AM   #6011
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CURSES! The Poet beat me by a hair!
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You go, Nym... I've not got much time to come up with a scramble!
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No, no, Poet. It's yours. I'm busy myself right now.
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Good job! If you haven't seen the movie, it's pretty good. I work in a cube farm and Office Space and Dilbert are pretty frequently referenced.
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1. Movie / star
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3. It was shot in 13 days.
4. Almost the entire movie takes place on a train.
5. There are actually two stars, male and female. The female star is the one in the scramble.
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Old 05-03-2011, 01:28 AM   #6021
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5. There are actually two stars, male and female. The female star is the one in the scramble.
6. The movie has a truly astonishing twist ending.
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Old 05-03-2011, 04:23 AM   #6023
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Good job, Harry. This is one hell of a good picture, despite its low budget. One of the best noirs, and I've always had a crush on Marie Windsor, though she was usually cast in B pictures. Just the way things worked in the old Hollywood studio system, I guess, because she was a first-rate actress.
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Oh yup, quality picture. Though I always thought the humour in it kinda kicked it out of the noir genre (not to say noir can't be funny). More like American Hitchcock imho - definitely smart, wicked, fun and worth a Sunday afternoon of anyones life.

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