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Greetings,
I'm writing a sci-fi novel in first-person perspective, and it is basically a series of recorded logs (like a diary).
The problem I have is that the descriptions of setting and surroundings tends to be extremely brief. Too brief. In any other perspective, the author can take liberties to describe the "majestic hue of the fading sunset, dying with the rise of the moon." Real people, however, just don't talk like that. "The sun set and night fell." Is a bit simpler and more accurate, but that wreaks havoc on your word count after a while.
When people write in their memoirs, downtown is downtown, a rose is a rose, and a lake is a lake. People naturally don't go into detail describing these things, ESPECIALLY if they don't think anyone is going to read it!
Does anyone here have any suggestions on how to bypass this first-person problem? I'd appreciate any advice.
I'm writing a sci-fi novel in first-person perspective, and it is basically a series of recorded logs (like a diary).
The problem I have is that the descriptions of setting and surroundings tends to be extremely brief. Too brief. In any other perspective, the author can take liberties to describe the "majestic hue of the fading sunset, dying with the rise of the moon." Real people, however, just don't talk like that. "The sun set and night fell." Is a bit simpler and more accurate, but that wreaks havoc on your word count after a while.
When people write in their memoirs, downtown is downtown, a rose is a rose, and a lake is a lake. People naturally don't go into detail describing these things, ESPECIALLY if they don't think anyone is going to read it!
Does anyone here have any suggestions on how to bypass this first-person problem? I'd appreciate any advice.