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Old 01-12-2011, 08:17 AM   #176
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In the first chapter of this novel the MCs meet in a grocery store. She sees him, and his superhotsexymanliness causes multiple orgasms. Right there. From 20 feet away.
I don't have a snort strong enough for this, and good thing. It would probably bust something in my nose.
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Well DB, without getting into the anatomical debate, I can personally attest to the possibility of vaginal and anal orgasm both with and without clitoral stimulation.

For me it all depends on hitting the right spot.

Just so you know.
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I don't have a snort strong enough for this, and good thing. It would probably bust something in my nose.
Mind you, if I met AS in the supermarket and he expressed a strong desire to do unseemly things to me ..... I can see the possibility of a spontaneous string of multiples ensuing.

More likely I'd just faint, but hey .. the possibility is there.
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Well DB, without getting into the anatomical debate, I can personally attest to the possibility of vaginal and anal orgasm both with and without clitoral stimulation.

For me it all depends on hitting the right spot.

Just so you know.
Think about the anatomy, particularly, the nerve paths, and the effects of pressure. The nerves lining the "floor" of the vagina, line the roof of the rectum.

Personal preferences and response will, as always, vary.
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Think about the anatomy, particularly, the nerve paths, and the effects of pressure. The nerves lining the "floor" of the vagina, line the roof of the rectum.

Personal preferences and response will, as always, vary.
I do understand the anatomy of it, just didn't want to get into a discussion of it that's all.

DB wondered about the legitimacy of vaginal orgasms, and I'm saying I've had them.

You're right though, it's a personal thing. Like I said, gotta hit the right spot.
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And then there are those who orgasm during childbirth. Not much clitoral stimulation there but lots of vaginal stimulation.
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And then there are those who orgasm during childbirth. Not much clitoral stimulation there but lots of vaginal stimulation.
Well, you learn something new every day. Huh. Never would have thought about that, but god knows after being stuck up there for 9 months the kid certainly owes it.

Not having ever stretched my pelvic girdle to produce one, I had no clue such a thing was possible. It does explain those women who have 12+ kids a bit better though ...
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Trust me-- of all the things I expected from natural childbirth, that was not one of them.
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As I'm not in the least maternal, but I am an unashamed wanker, I'll stick to my method of knowing where my next orgasm is coming from, thank you.
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Not having ever stretched my pelvic girdle to produce one, I had no clue such a thing was possible. It does explain those women who have 12+ kids a bit better though ...
Neither did I, and I really think that needs to be in the brochure.

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Trust me-- of all the things I expected from natural childbirth, that was not one of them.
I have heard of this as well, found it in my research of natural childbirth when I was pregnant. I kinda udnerstand how it could happen, but it so did not happen for me. I had no drugs on board, and though it was bearable, it was in no way pleasant for me to give birth.
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I do understand the anatomy of it, just didn't want to get into a discussion of it that's all.
DB wondered about the legitimacy of vaginal orgasms, and I'm saying I've had them.
But it's likely, or possible, that not everyone can. A certain Lady I know well is sexually aggressive, enthusiastic, and goes off like a 500 lb bomb, but she's never had a vaginal orgasm.

Serious research into sexual anatomy and response by trained scientists is still thin on the ground, especially in the US. Government funding agencies actually do fund such research, but it often has to be disguised or obscured in dense biomedical language.

There are Congressional staffers who comb newspapers, magazines, and even the original medical and scientific literature, looking for government-funded projects on sex, abortion, climate change, alternate energy and other subjects with political payloads. That also includes projects with 'funny names' that can be ridiculed on the floor of the House or Senate. Not everyone there is a friend of science.

Clitoral function and anatomy has not been really understood until the last three decades, and some things, like the function of the G spot, are understood only in outline. That's why it's possible for some to question its existence.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clitoris

But then there's the questions: Do we really want to know everything? Should all the mystery be taken away?
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And then there are those who orgasm during childbirth. Not much clitoral stimulation there but lots of vaginal stimulation.
My wife spent most of her labors trying to strangle me for doing that to her.
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My wife spent most of her labors trying to strangle me for doing that to her.
haha! Yeah, I can see why.
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Neither did I, and I really think that needs to be in the brochure.

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AS = Alexander Skarsgard - seriously swoonable.
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I'm young but orgasms with a partner involved are extremely rare. I think I've only ever had one (but it was good). I think I just need more time with them before it gets good and relationships never lasted that long.
That said, I often didn't want an orgasm. Hard to believe I know but I like sex without the climax, it feels good in other ways. Sometimes, my partner was trying so hard to make me come it turned me right off...
One orgasm that was really and the build up was great would be much better than multiple screaming orgasms which sound like your MC is overdoing it a bit IMO.

However, on my own, well, with some mechanical assistance anyway, three is pretty much my limit. Anymore and it gets very sore although often I only need the one to feel really satisfied. Quality over quantity my friends.
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I dunno... when ( back in the stone ages) we used to have sex, 3 or 4 times for her was the norm. 5-6 if we'd been drinking, but not too much... more if we were feeling up for a marathon.
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I'm young but orgasms with a partner involved are extremely rare. I think I've only ever had one (but it was good). I think I just need more time with them before it gets good and relationships never lasted that long.
That said, I often didn't want an orgasm. Hard to believe I know but I like sex without the climax, it feels good in other ways. Sometimes, my partner was trying so hard to make me come it turned me right off...
One orgasm that was really and the build up was great would be much better than multiple screaming orgasms which sound like your MC is overdoing it a bit IMO.

However, on my own, well, with some mechanical assistance anyway, three is pretty much my limit. Anymore and it gets very sore although often I only need the one to feel really satisfied. Quality over quantity my friends.
I don't know your age, but it will probably happen more as you get older. I didn't receive an orgasm during sex until mid twenties. And multiples until I was almost 30. But I do agree, I can have wonderful sex even if I don't come. I can't imagine it would be pleasant for a man to not finish, if he stays hard it would be uncomfortable, but thankfully women are different in that regard.

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Um, why? Do you not believe that 3,4 or 5 climaxes is possible for a woman?
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5 or 6 is nothing compared to the most I've had in one day.

And for the record I was 22 before I had an orgasm through sex. TMI? Ah, who cares? I've been ill and I'm just glad to be alive.
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Sorry, but… um, hey... are you really asking the right people for what's norm? Anyone that can write this stuff -yeah, me too- should not be allowed to answer that question. Just thought I'd throw that out there. Gee, I skipped over a few replies, I hope no else pointed out the obvious. I will return to my room now.
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Are you suggesting the folks here are a bunch of demented preeverts?

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I hope so. I hate to be alone.
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I never had one until I was in my twenties either and then I think the only reason I could relax enough to go was because I really trusted my partner. Before that I had been playing at sex; after that night I felt like I had been given the gift of sight or something.

After that night, I got better and better at it. 3 or 4 is totally usual for me now.
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One orgasm that was really and the build up was great would be much better than multiple screaming orgasms which sound like your MC is overdoing it a bit IMO.
You do realise you can have multiple screaming orgasms which each feel great and have build up?
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Quality over quantity my friends.
The two are not mutually exclusive.

As I've already said in this thread, I think (or maybe it was another), the more orgasms I have, the easier it is to have the next.

And the law of diminishing returns definitely does not apply here. The only thing that stops me is tiredness, or my partner's cock refusing to comply.
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