When a character is thinking something, does it need to be italicized, or just write that they were thinking that ("So this is what happened" John thought to himself)?
How about radio transmissions? When a character is talking over the radio, do the replies need to be italicized?
For example:
"Get us out of here, now!" the commander shouted.
"We're trying, but the enemy is cutting off our routes to you!" the radio operator replied back.
OR
"Where is the air support?" Sergeant Baker yelled into the hand mic.
"We're facing heavy AA fire." the radio operator replied back, "We can't give you support until you knock those guns out!"
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I'm guessing that the dialogue should be italicized? It does look cooler if nothing else, but I'm not sure what the "rule" is for talking over the phone/radio (when the other person talking isn't in the same scene/area).
How about radio transmissions? When a character is talking over the radio, do the replies need to be italicized?
For example:
"Get us out of here, now!" the commander shouted.
"We're trying, but the enemy is cutting off our routes to you!" the radio operator replied back.
OR
"Where is the air support?" Sergeant Baker yelled into the hand mic.
"We're facing heavy AA fire." the radio operator replied back, "We can't give you support until you knock those guns out!"
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I'm guessing that the dialogue should be italicized? It does look cooler if nothing else, but I'm not sure what the "rule" is for talking over the phone/radio (when the other person talking isn't in the same scene/area).