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Old 05-18-2007, 04:37 AM   #8151
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I would, however, wouldn't it be less effective with question marks?
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Old 05-18-2007, 04:41 AM   #8152
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Wouldn't it just give your genius something higher to aim for? Do you want an example?

Don't you all know you're all losers here? Don't you know how popular I am? Can you even guess how many of the lurkers support me by pm? Wouldn't you all like to write as good as me? Why doesn't somebody baaaaaaannnn me, pllleeeaaassseee?
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Old 05-18-2007, 04:42 AM   #8153
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That was good! Want to finish writing my flounce for me?
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Old 05-18-2007, 04:44 AM   #8154
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Sure. Do you want to go to bed for me?
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Old 05-18-2007, 05:09 AM   #8155
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Na, go ahead and get your rest. See you tomorrow?
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Old 05-18-2007, 05:58 AM   #8156
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Isn't tomorrow a relative term since there are people in other time zones who are already in tomorrow, though for them it's today?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:02 AM   #8157
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Are you into small details?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:07 AM   #8158
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Do you know that I'm even interested in large details too?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:08 AM   #8159
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I didn't know that...are you really?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:15 AM   #8160
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Are we going to talk details or go back to the big picture and discuss nuts?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:16 AM   #8161
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Sometimes do you wonder what the difference is?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:27 AM   #8162
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Do the lines seem blurred to you too?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:28 AM   #8163
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No, do you think you had better have your eyes checked?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:37 AM   #8164
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Where are my eyes anyway? Have you seen them around?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:39 AM   #8165
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Yes, but I thought those were eight balls rolling down the street, were those yours?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:50 AM   #8166
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Do you think I should chase after them and bark? ...and would you believe that the other (real) dog is now whining to go out for a walk, which means I must go and say au revoir?
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Old 05-18-2007, 06:55 AM   #8167
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Does that mean you'll be looking for fire hydrants?

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Is woof going to pee?
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Inky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsInky is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Would you like me to give you a list of the disturbing things Woof has done? Would you be disturbed yourself if in fact I admitted it's kinda turning me on?
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Old 05-18-2007, 12:01 PM   #8170
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Do you come with an off switch too?
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If you are addressing me, do you feel I need one? And what happened to your other avatar? Blondes..blech...oh...question...hmmmm...where's the Spaniard looking hotty?
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Habla espagnol?
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Ah, Woof. You bring back my smile. And here I was about to leave this thread forever, for is that not what Masking intended by his nasty little remark? Sí, hablo un poco español, amante. But for now, would you understand my soul is not the strongest, and I've need to go lick my wounds?
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Dear inked, do you want me to help you lick your wounds?
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*blushing with stupid grin* Would you? Think I'll need a doggie bag?
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