Read books by AWers!

Welcome to the AbsoluteWrite Water Cooler! Please read The Newbie Guide To Absolute Write

editing for authors ad

A publisher or agency using Google ads to solicit your novel probably isn't anyone you want to write for.


Go Back   Absolute Write Water Cooler > General Writing Interest > Young Adult
Register FAQ Calendar Mark Forums Read

Closed Thread
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 06-21-2011, 05:20 PM   #2201
Parataxis
Obsessive Plotting Disorder
 
Parataxis's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Posts: 384
Parataxis has a spectacular aura
Ah, time differences. I was hitting snooze when you posted that.
__________________
The Book of Worlds (WIP) ~ Chapter 3/19

World Architect
Sharing one writer's journey of world discovery. Tips, How to's and Articles about World Building.
Parataxis is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 05:22 PM   #2202
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
I don't feel like doing anything. I feel shit.
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter
lisalulu09 is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 05:26 PM   #2203
Parataxis
Obsessive Plotting Disorder
 
Parataxis's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Posts: 384
Parataxis has a spectacular aura
I'm sorry. I hope you feel better.
__________________
The Book of Worlds (WIP) ~ Chapter 3/19

World Architect
Sharing one writer's journey of world discovery. Tips, How to's and Articles about World Building.
Parataxis is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 05:27 PM   #2204
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
That time of the month = little motivation.
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter

Last edited by lisalulu09; 06-21-2011 at 05:31 PM.
lisalulu09 is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 05:31 PM   #2205
Parataxis
Obsessive Plotting Disorder
 
Parataxis's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Posts: 384
Parataxis has a spectacular aura
Yeah, I know the feeling. :/

Right now I'm writing a blog entry to try and pull from a different part of my brain.
__________________
The Book of Worlds (WIP) ~ Chapter 3/19

World Architect
Sharing one writer's journey of world discovery. Tips, How to's and Articles about World Building.
Parataxis is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 05:39 PM   #2206
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
Do you name your chapters?
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter
lisalulu09 is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 05:52 PM   #2207
Parataxis
Obsessive Plotting Disorder
 
Parataxis's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Posts: 384
Parataxis has a spectacular aura
Yeah. I really like naming chapters. My favorites from my WIP so far are Subterra Incognita, The Castaway, Darkness and Silence and Wasteland.
__________________
The Book of Worlds (WIP) ~ Chapter 3/19

World Architect
Sharing one writer's journey of world discovery. Tips, How to's and Articles about World Building.
Parataxis is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 05:59 PM   #2208
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
The ones for Suns and Stars just alternate between Tristan and Dulcie. For my pop-punk Cinderella idea I want to use song lyrics that fit important scenes, if I ever write it, but I know there's issues concerning that sort of thing. I have no ideas what I'm going to do with regards to my other ideas.

How do you choose them? During the writing process? During the editing process? Or does it depend when you think of one?
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter
lisalulu09 is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 06:03 PM   #2209
Parataxis
Obsessive Plotting Disorder
 
Parataxis's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Posts: 384
Parataxis has a spectacular aura
Well, I try to have at least a placeholder title while I'm writing a chapter. But if I have an idea for a future chapter title I go in and add it to my outline.

Sometimes I'm not very happy with my placeholders. Chapter 3, for instance, is called The Star and the Angel, which will probably change as soon as I think of a better one.
__________________
The Book of Worlds (WIP) ~ Chapter 3/19

World Architect
Sharing one writer's journey of world discovery. Tips, How to's and Articles about World Building.
Parataxis is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 06:10 PM   #2210
amlptj
Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie!
 
amlptj's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Philadelphia PA
Posts: 10,272
amlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Morning everyone!

Hey anyone know computers?
__________________
Legend of the Freaks
YA Horror/Thriller Series
8 of 12 books complete
WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs

Unsung Zeros
Psychological Thriller
Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold

The Amnesia Journey
YA Fantasy

RBSL
Contemp/romantic comedy



Legend of a Freak (Blog!)
amlptj is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 06:11 PM   #2211
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
No.

Also, I started The F.R.E.A.K.S earlier, but I had to stop because I was feeling a bit... off.
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter
lisalulu09 is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 06:22 PM   #2212
Parataxis
Obsessive Plotting Disorder
 
Parataxis's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Posts: 384
Parataxis has a spectacular aura
Hey guys, on a run.

New blog post: Getting Started--Scope and Focus
__________________
The Book of Worlds (WIP) ~ Chapter 3/19

World Architect
Sharing one writer's journey of world discovery. Tips, How to's and Articles about World Building.
Parataxis is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 06:33 PM   #2213
Horserider
Ever onward
 
Horserider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: The TARDIS with David Tennant
Posts: 19,115
Horserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Quote:
Originally Posted by amlptj View Post
Morning everyone!

Hey anyone know computers?
I know enough to get by. What's the problem?
__________________
| Blog | Twitter |

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. ~The Book Thief

WIPs:

Heartbreak - writing

Currently Reading:
Sense and Sensibility by Jane Austen

Horserider is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:06 PM   #2214
Thalia
zaldrīzes buzdari iksos daor
 
Thalia's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2009
Location: The Land of Always Winter
Posts: 6,955
Thalia is a candidate for sainthoodThalia is a candidate for sainthoodThalia is a candidate for sainthoodThalia is a candidate for sainthoodThalia is a candidate for sainthoodThalia is a candidate for sainthoodThalia is a candidate for sainthoodThalia is a candidate for sainthood
I could try, Ally.
__________________
A constellation of tears on your lashes
Burn everything you love, then burn the ashes
In the end everything collides
My childhood spat back out the monster that you see
Thalia is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:08 PM   #2215
parumpdragon
fire breather
 
parumpdragon's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Arizona
Posts: 25,921
parumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Morning!
parumpdragon is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:11 PM   #2216
Kyrie
Queen of Adverbs (unfortunately)
 
Kyrie's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Victorian London
Posts: 9,213
Kyrie has a double-platinum reputationKyrie has a double-platinum reputationKyrie has a double-platinum reputationKyrie has a double-platinum reputationKyrie has a double-platinum reputationKyrie has a double-platinum reputationKyrie has a double-platinum reputation
Morning. Sorry I disappeared last night - I shut off my laptop and turned out my lights so the flies would go away.

Also, newspaper. Newspaper rocks.
__________________
Letters to Oliver: querying. Sent: 43 Rejections: 26 Fulls: 4 Partials: 1

A Terror of Darkness: v. 4.0 - 67k - waiting for beta comments


And then I met a man called the Doctor. A man who could change his face. And he took me away from home in his magical machine. He showed me the whole of time and space. I thought it would never end.


BLOGGER! YOUTUBE!
Kyrie is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:27 PM   #2217
amlptj
Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie!
 
amlptj's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Philadelphia PA
Posts: 10,272
amlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
sorry, problem solves itself mysteriously... yeah odd internet problem at work that held us up for now 2 hours.

And Lisa, thanks thats great!
__________________
Legend of the Freaks
YA Horror/Thriller Series
8 of 12 books complete
WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs

Unsung Zeros
Psychological Thriller
Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold

The Amnesia Journey
YA Fantasy

RBSL
Contemp/romantic comedy



Legend of a Freak (Blog!)
amlptj is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:29 PM   #2218
parumpdragon
fire breather
 
parumpdragon's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Arizona
Posts: 25,921
parumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsparumpdragon is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Hi guys, working on an old WIP for the moment.
parumpdragon is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:32 PM   #2219
amlptj
Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie!
 
amlptj's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Philadelphia PA
Posts: 10,272
amlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
hey parump! Cool, work work work!

Yeah still on my current WIP. Going to finally write a really cute fun scene involving my less scene characters... the adorable younger brothers of Max and Pip. Funny how i had this planned for like 4 years and now finally found a place to put it.
__________________
Legend of the Freaks
YA Horror/Thriller Series
8 of 12 books complete
WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs

Unsung Zeros
Psychological Thriller
Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold

The Amnesia Journey
YA Fantasy

RBSL
Contemp/romantic comedy



Legend of a Freak (Blog!)
amlptj is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:37 PM   #2220
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
I'm still trying to think of one more note for Chapter Seven. This is the chapter where the second plot point comes in.
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter
lisalulu09 is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:51 PM   #2221
amlptj
Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie!
 
amlptj's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Philadelphia PA
Posts: 10,272
amlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsamlptj is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Ok well now that everything in my office is working again, i actually have to do work... talk to you all later if i get the chance.
__________________
Legend of the Freaks
YA Horror/Thriller Series
8 of 12 books complete
WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs

Unsung Zeros
Psychological Thriller
Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold

The Amnesia Journey
YA Fantasy

RBSL
Contemp/romantic comedy



Legend of a Freak (Blog!)
amlptj is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 07:55 PM   #2222
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
Bye.
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter
lisalulu09 is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 10:05 PM   #2223
Babbling Brooke
Squirrel!
 
Babbling Brooke's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 469
Babbling Brooke is on a distinguished road
Hiya, guys!

Wow, I really need to start waking up earlier.

How's it going? Are your characters being nice to you?
__________________
Currently Working On:

Untitled YA Fantasy

Babbling Brooke is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 10:10 PM   #2224
Horserider
Ever onward
 
Horserider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: The TARDIS with David Tennant
Posts: 19,115
Horserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsHorserider is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Hi Brooke. It's going pretty good here. I'm revising so my characters don't really have the option of acting up today.
__________________
| Blog | Twitter |

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. ~The Book Thief

WIPs:

Heartbreak - writing

Currently Reading:
Sense and Sensibility by Jane Austen

Horserider is offline  
Old 06-21-2011, 10:11 PM   #2225
lisalulu09
Potterhead Gleek
 
lisalulu09's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 14,631
lisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to beholdlisalulu09 is a splendid one to behold
Tristan isn't.

ETA: Dinner.
__________________
Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising
Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist - On hold
Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (14.5K/24K)

Reading:
"Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens
"American Gods" - Neil Gaiman

Facebook
Blog
Twitter

Last edited by lisalulu09; 06-21-2011 at 10:29 PM.
lisalulu09 is offline  
Closed Thread

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Custom Search

If this site is helpful to you,
Please consider a voluntary subscription to defray ongoing expenses.

Buy Scrivener 2 for Mac OS X (Regular Licence)


All times are GMT +4.5. The time now is 09:54 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2013, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.