You know, I've read a lot of disparaging of dialogue tags online, and 99% of the time I agree. "Said" is invisible and is all you need 95% of the time for clarity - I agree. Ridiculousness like "ejaculated" and "queried" and "uttered" should never happen. I agree. But there's one particular word that everyone all over the internet seems to love to hate, and that's "hiss." And really, you know, that one... I just don't see it.
Yes, 100% literally, a hiss is a sound that a snake or an angry cat makes, but when I read it as a dialogue tag, the tone that comes to mind is a really fierce, angry whisper. It's not snapping (or "barking," as in "barking orders," which seems to be just fine with everyone?); that's too loud. Just saying "whispered" seems stupid. I think of "hiss" being used more like... ex. when characters are sneaking around in an enemy base and one gets too far ahead and the other is like (random shitty example off the top of my head but you get it lol),
Mary swept a frantic eye over the room, still clutching the tattered book to her chest. Jacob? Where was Jacob?
A footstep sounded. There! Foolhardy as always, he'd darted out into the open and started down the corridor. Her stomach clenched.
"Get back here!" she hissed, shrinking into a hollow behind one of the columns. "Are you trying to blow our cover?"
that honestly reads better to me than
"Get back here!" She shrank into a hollow behind one of the columns. "Are you trying to blow our cover?"
I don't know. It just... doesn't offend me when not overused. At all. And I guess I wonder why I seem to be the only one.
Yes, 100% literally, a hiss is a sound that a snake or an angry cat makes, but when I read it as a dialogue tag, the tone that comes to mind is a really fierce, angry whisper. It's not snapping (or "barking," as in "barking orders," which seems to be just fine with everyone?); that's too loud. Just saying "whispered" seems stupid. I think of "hiss" being used more like... ex. when characters are sneaking around in an enemy base and one gets too far ahead and the other is like (random shitty example off the top of my head but you get it lol),
Mary swept a frantic eye over the room, still clutching the tattered book to her chest. Jacob? Where was Jacob?
A footstep sounded. There! Foolhardy as always, he'd darted out into the open and started down the corridor. Her stomach clenched.
"Get back here!" she hissed, shrinking into a hollow behind one of the columns. "Are you trying to blow our cover?"
that honestly reads better to me than
"Get back here!" She shrank into a hollow behind one of the columns. "Are you trying to blow our cover?"
I don't know. It just... doesn't offend me when not overused. At all. And I guess I wonder why I seem to be the only one.