Teens Writing for Teens, part 6 - Page 263

lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 02:05 AM

Ohh.

comped · 07-01-2012, 02:05 AM

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Originally Posted by lisalulu09

I am actually embarrassed.

Yeah.

No need to be embarrassed. I should have stated myself clearer. You AND tally are both very beautiful

.

comped

Thalia · 07-01-2012, 02:09 AM

I just spent four hours on a boat. Went to stingray city, then snorkeled... Man, I am pooped. Fun day, though. My friend is there, jumping on me out of fear (ad since she's 5'10 and I'm 5'7 it was pretty funny) and I'm there, "OMG YOU GUYS ARE SO CUTE COME HERE".

lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 02:17 AM

I hate being on boats on the sea.

On a river, if I can have some role in controlling it, I'm ... okay.

ETA: Thanks, Matt!

Carry on like this, and you'll make a girl very happy one day!

comped · 07-01-2012, 02:42 AM

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Originally Posted by lisalulu09

ETA: Thanks, Matt!

Carry on like this, and you'll make a girl very happy one day!

Try telling the girls at my school this....LOL

comped
PS: can you and tally TRY and not start a crush war over me?

Zoealea · 07-01-2012, 02:43 AM

Just popping in to say this conversation of the crushes is really amusing to me.

Also, I have no books to put on my eReader. Booooooo

comped · 07-01-2012, 02:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Zoealea

Just popping in to say this conversation of the crushes is really amusing to me.

Also, I have no books to put on my eReader. Booooooo

It is to me too

.

If you like plays, I have a PDF of my 1 act you could have, if your reader takes PDFs. What kind of reader is it?

comped

Thalia · 07-01-2012, 02:49 AM

I don't even know what a crush war means

Oh hey, Lisa, I'm drawing a blank and feeling kinda guilty... I know your bday was a few weeks ago, but... You turned 20, right?

lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 02:50 AM

Yup.

Question:

In the police, who are the ones that usually go to people's houses to tell them stuff? I'm thinking PC, but I'm not sure.

ETA: I do not know what a crush war is either.

Parametric · 07-01-2012, 02:52 AM

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Originally Posted by lisalulu09

In the police, who are the ones that usually go to people's houses to tell them stuff? I'm thinking PC, but I'm not sure.

There are specialist family liaison officers who deliver news of a death. News article.

edit: Which may not be what you meant, but in fairness, that was a really vague question.

lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 02:55 AM

That's what I wanted to know. Thanks.

Parametric · 07-01-2012, 02:55 AM

No problem.

Zoealea · 07-01-2012, 02:56 AM

Comped-I have a Sony eReader, but yeah it can do PDF. What's your play about?

Lisa- Happy belated Birthdaaaaaay!

lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 02:56 AM

Thank you, Zoe!

comped · 07-01-2012, 03:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Thalia

I don't even know what a crush war means

Oh hey, Lisa, I'm drawing a blank and feeling kinda guilty... I know your bday was a few weeks ago, but... You turned 20, right?

A crush war is you know, when 2 girls like the same dude, and try and get him to like her, at any cost... (hasn't that been made into a movie? oh well, another subplot for my plays...)

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Originally Posted by lisalulu09

ETA: I do not know what a crush war is either.

Damn. I'm attracted to a 20 year old...what's the odds of that

(and happy birthday

)

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Originally Posted by Zoealea

Comped-I have a Sony eReader, but yeah it can do PDF. What's your play about?

Lisa- Happy belated Birthdaaaaaay!

“The facts of romance” is a story of comedy, love, and teenage lust. It’s the story of William Potter, a freshman at Jonathan Larson High School, in New Bumpkin, MA, and Margaret Blake, a senior. When they go on a date, they end up staying out past her father’s curfew; they end up getting a hotel room. Then, things happen, and she ends up pregnant. William’s parents, Henry, and Lorraine, were pretty upset. They were not as upset as Sherman and Mildred, who hit the roof. The four parents verbally abuse the teens. Then the teen’s friends, and drama teacher, Mr. McIntyre, enter. Will proposes, and the wedding happens. Finally, Henry reveals that their other children are now expecting, prompting Sherman to ask for a shotgun, and they eminently tell their audience they’re going to hell, at which point the play ends.

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lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 03:15 AM

How old are you, Matt?

comped · 07-01-2012, 03:18 AM

15 turning 16 on 23/9...

Zoealea · 07-01-2012, 03:18 AM

Comped, I repped you.

lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 03:19 AM

Tally is sixteen.

Zoealea · 07-01-2012, 03:22 AM

...does that mean that comped is the ~youngest~ now? Or is there someone younger?

Cuz, I was the youngest at one point I think.

comped · 07-01-2012, 03:22 AM

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Originally Posted by lisalulu09

Tally is sixteen.

And why is this important? LOL

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lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 03:23 AM

I think it might be Taylor that's the youngest...

lisalulu09 · 07-01-2012, 03:23 AM

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Originally Posted by comped

And why is this important? LOL

comped

Just sayin'.

comped · 07-01-2012, 03:24 AM

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Originally Posted by Zoealea

...does that mean that comped is the ~youngest~ now? Or is there someone younger?

Cuz, I was the youngest at one point I think.

Back when I lurked around AW in 2010ish, there used to be a 13 year old kid...pretty crazy. kept talking about some story with sex and drugs and teen pregnancy...

He'd be about my age nowadays...
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Zoealea · 07-01-2012, 03:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lisalulu09

I think it might be Taylor that's the youngest...

Oh yeah, I think you're right

07-01-2012, 02:05 AM	#6551
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	Ohh. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

07-01-2012, 02:09 AM	#6553
Thalia zaldrīzes buzdari iksos daor Join Date: May 2009 Location: The Land of Always Winter Posts: 6,953	I just spent four hours on a boat. Went to stingray city, then snorkeled... Man, I am pooped. Fun day, though. My friend is there, jumping on me out of fear (ad since she's 5'10 and I'm 5'7 it was pretty funny) and I'm there, "OMG YOU GUYS ARE SO CUTE COME HERE". __________________ A constellation of tears on your lashes Burn everything you love, then burn the ashes In the end everything collides My childhood spat back out the monster that you see

07-01-2012, 02:17 AM	#6554
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	I hate being on boats on the sea. On a river, if I can have some role in controlling it, I'm ... okay. ETA: Thanks, Matt! Carry on like this, and you'll make a girl very happy one day! __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

07-01-2012, 02:43 AM	#6556
Zoealea Mmmm, caffeine. Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: The TARDIS (I hope) Posts: 3,094	Just popping in to say this conversation of the crushes is really amusing to me. Also, I have no books to put on my eReader. Booooooo __________________ Lovely Lies- 27k/50k Detachable (NaNo novel)- 1.6k/50k

07-01-2012, 02:49 AM	#6558
Thalia zaldrīzes buzdari iksos daor Join Date: May 2009 Location: The Land of Always Winter Posts: 6,953	I don't even know what a crush war means Oh hey, Lisa, I'm drawing a blank and feeling kinda guilty... I know your bday was a few weeks ago, but... You turned 20, right? __________________ A constellation of tears on your lashes Burn everything you love, then burn the ashes In the end everything collides My childhood spat back out the monster that you see

07-01-2012, 02:50 AM	#6559
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	Yup. Question: In the police, who are the ones that usually go to people's houses to tell them stuff? I'm thinking PC, but I'm not sure. ETA: I do not know what a crush war is either. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

07-01-2012, 02:55 AM	#6561
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	That's what I wanted to know. Thanks. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

07-01-2012, 02:55 AM	#6562
Parametric useless idiot Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Bristol, England Posts: 9,088	No problem.

07-01-2012, 02:56 AM	#6563
Zoealea Mmmm, caffeine. Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: The TARDIS (I hope) Posts: 3,094	Comped-I have a Sony eReader, but yeah it can do PDF. What's your play about? Lisa- Happy belated Birthdaaaaaay! __________________ Lovely Lies- 27k/50k Detachable (NaNo novel)- 1.6k/50k

07-01-2012, 02:56 AM	#6564
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	Thank you, Zoe! __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

07-01-2012, 03:15 AM	#6566
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	How old are you, Matt? __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

07-01-2012, 03:18 AM	#6567
comped Why Me Worry? Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 212	15 turning 16 on 23/9...

07-01-2012, 03:18 AM	#6568
Zoealea Mmmm, caffeine. Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: The TARDIS (I hope) Posts: 3,094	Comped, I repped you. __________________ Lovely Lies- 27k/50k Detachable (NaNo novel)- 1.6k/50k

07-01-2012, 03:19 AM	#6569
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	Tally is sixteen. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

07-01-2012, 03:22 AM	#6570
Zoealea Mmmm, caffeine. Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: The TARDIS (I hope) Posts: 3,094	...does that mean that comped is the ~youngest~ now? Or is there someone younger? Cuz, I was the youngest at one point I think. __________________ Lovely Lies- 27k/50k Detachable (NaNo novel)- 1.6k/50k

07-01-2012, 03:23 AM	#6572
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,612	I think it might be Taylor that's the youngest... __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

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