Teens Writing for Teens, part 6 - Page 84

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:17 PM

Awww.

Ke$ha fits Hannah's vibe later in the script, but I'm not sure at the start. I'm thinking Avril Lavigne sort of stuff.

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:20 PM

WAS JUST TOLD THE MOST AWESOME THING! HAHHAHAHAH!

Sort of Friend person: So you write books? And want to go into forensics for the FBI?
Me: Yep.
SOFP: So your going to be like the real life Bones, mixed with Abby from NCIS, and Sully from X-Files?
Me: (hysterical laughter) Yeah, totally sums up who I am.

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:22 PM

Hahahahaha. BRILLIANT!

Hannah wants to break free from everything her parents expect her to be, she's always had a rebellious streak, but Nick helps her break free. Cue drunken nights and sex on the beach.

And maybe drugs.

Nick has an ex, but he hasn't told me how she fits into the plot yet.

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:34 PM

Cool!

hahahah my MC's ex's show up often in the book... well because the book is about there horrible breakups, and how Jake and Andy help each other through them by becoming BFF's, then when all the drama is settled and they are finally officially over there ex's get together.

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:36 PM

Well, she's just central to Nick's internal conflict. She never appears. Who goes on holiday with their ex???

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:42 PM

Ah ok.

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:43 PM

I just need to find out WHAT.

HannahLovely · 04-11-2012, 08:44 PM

Wrote 500 words so far! Now to work up the motivation to do homework that's already late...

Don't professors understand that it's hard to concentrate on essays when ghosts, witches and characters that don't listen are bouncing around in your head?

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:47 PM

No, professors totally don't understand that. I wish they would.

What year are you in college?

After my first i quickly realized how little i would ever be able to write while school was going on.

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:53 PM

Can anyone guess the plot?

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:54 PM

huh???

Horserider · 04-11-2012, 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by amlptj

Everyone would want to use one! Not like coffee is necessarily a pleasure to drink for most. I got used to the taste by adding in chocolate, and lots of sugar and cream, but i mainly drink it for the caffeine... but what if you didnt need to do that?

Not that i could ever figure out how to make something like that, but still its a good freaking idea!

1. Have you ever seen Meet the Robinsons?

2. There are caffeine pills. I have a friend that keeps them for emergency purposes during finals.

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:55 PM

Guess the plot of SK.

Trying to keep this thing alive before coursework and dinner.

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Horserider

1. Have you ever seen Meet the Robinsons?

2. There are caffeine pills. I have a friend that keeps them for emergency purposes during finals.

No i haven't, why?

And yes i know there are. But they don't work as well as i'd like them too. Sometimes i wish i could get a hold of ADHD medication, i hear that keeps you really awake and focused.

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:56 PM

romance?

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:57 PM

And...

I can't decide on my research methods for this... thing I might have to do next year.

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 08:58 PM

Don't know what? I know its got singing right?

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 08:59 PM

That's Electric Dreamer. This is Sunshine Kisses, completely different.

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 09:02 PM

Sorry don't know then.

You would think i'm a drug addict going through withdraw with how frantically i'm shaking my foot without caffeine!!! GRRRRRRRR!!! I NEED COFFEE!!!

Horserider · 04-11-2012, 09:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by amlptj

No i haven't, why?

And yes i know there are. But they don't work as well as i'd like them too. Sometimes i wish i could get a hold of ADHD medication, i hear that keeps you really awake and focused.

Just watch this scene. Don't worry, you don't have to see the rest of the movie to understand. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UR4DzHo5hz8

I've heard that too. I'd love to study the long-term side effects.

amlptj · 04-11-2012, 09:10 PM

DAMN IT!!! They stole my idea hahahahah! or i stole there's oh well, i would still love if they were real.

As tempted i've been to some how find ADHD meds and use them, i know they totally have to have some horrible side effects if you use them too much. My friend and i had a nerdy fight over this issue, because we were sleep deprived and ended up talking about what would happen if you used them too much... I actually think there is a Law and Order SVU episode on it, my friend told me.

HannahLovely · 04-11-2012, 09:48 PM

I'm a freshman at the moment. And coffee is the only thing that keeps me from collapsing to the ground in exhaustion.

I think caffeine pills sound like a great idea, actually, I might have to go find some!

lisalulu09 · 04-11-2012, 09:48 PM

Dinner in a minute.

Parametric · 04-11-2012, 09:50 PM

Never tried coffee.

Zoombie · 04-11-2012, 09:59 PM

Same here. Also, never tried beer, weed or fags.

Well, there was this one really cute guy...

04-11-2012, 08:17 PM	#2076
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	Awww. Ke$ha fits Hannah's vibe later in the script, but I'm not sure at the start. I'm thinking Avril Lavigne sort of stuff. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 08:20 PM	#2077
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	WAS JUST TOLD THE MOST AWESOME THING! HAHHAHAHAH! Sort of Friend person: So you write books? And want to go into forensics for the FBI? Me: Yep. SOFP: So your going to be like the real life Bones, mixed with Abby from NCIS, and Sully from X-Files? Me: (hysterical laughter) Yeah, totally sums up who I am. __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 08:22 PM	#2078
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	Hahahahaha. BRILLIANT! Hannah wants to break free from everything her parents expect her to be, she's always had a rebellious streak, but Nick helps her break free. Cue drunken nights and sex on the beach. And maybe drugs. Nick has an ex, but he hasn't told me how she fits into the plot yet. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 08:34 PM	#2079
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	Cool! hahahah my MC's ex's show up often in the book... well because the book is about there horrible breakups, and how Jake and Andy help each other through them by becoming BFF's, then when all the drama is settled and they are finally officially over there ex's get together. __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 08:36 PM	#2080
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	Well, she's just central to Nick's internal conflict. She never appears. Who goes on holiday with their ex??? __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 08:42 PM	#2081
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	Ah ok. __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 08:43 PM	#2082
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	I just need to find out WHAT. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 08:44 PM	#2083
HannahLovely practical experience, FTW Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: The TARDIS parked at Hogwarts inside Narnia. Posts: 150	Wrote 500 words so far! Now to work up the motivation to do homework that's already late... Don't professors understand that it's hard to concentrate on essays when ghosts, witches and characters that don't listen are bouncing around in your head? __________________ My blog about writerly things, reading and sparkles Goodreads Twitter Current WIP: Paranormal/horror ghost story that needs a title: 8k

04-11-2012, 08:47 PM	#2084
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	No, professors totally don't understand that. I wish they would. What year are you in college? After my first i quickly realized how little i would ever be able to write while school was going on. __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 08:53 PM	#2085
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	Can anyone guess the plot? __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 08:54 PM	#2086
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	huh??? __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 08:55 PM	#2088
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	Guess the plot of SK. Trying to keep this thing alive before coursework and dinner. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 08:56 PM	#2090
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	romance? __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 08:57 PM	#2091
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	And... I can't decide on my research methods for this... thing I might have to do next year. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 08:58 PM	#2092
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	Don't know what? I know its got singing right? __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 08:59 PM	#2093
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	That's Electric Dreamer. This is Sunshine Kisses, completely different. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 09:02 PM	#2094
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	Sorry don't know then. You would think i'm a drug addict going through withdraw with how frantically i'm shaking my foot without caffeine!!! GRRRRRRRR!!! I NEED COFFEE!!! __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 09:10 PM	#2096
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	DAMN IT!!! They stole my idea hahahahah! or i stole there's oh well, i would still love if they were real. As tempted i've been to some how find ADHD meds and use them, i know they totally have to have some horrible side effects if you use them too much. My friend and i had a nerdy fight over this issue, because we were sleep deprived and ended up talking about what would happen if you used them too much... I actually think there is a Law and Order SVU episode on it, my friend told me. __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

04-11-2012, 09:48 PM	#2097
HannahLovely practical experience, FTW Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: The TARDIS parked at Hogwarts inside Narnia. Posts: 150	I'm a freshman at the moment. And coffee is the only thing that keeps me from collapsing to the ground in exhaustion. I think caffeine pills sound like a great idea, actually, I might have to go find some! __________________ My blog about writerly things, reading and sparkles Goodreads Twitter Current WIP: Paranormal/horror ghost story that needs a title: 8k

04-11-2012, 09:48 PM	#2098
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,611	Dinner in a minute. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Revising Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "The Graveyard Book" - Neil Gaiman Facebook Blog Twitter

04-11-2012, 09:50 PM	#2099
Parametric useless idiot Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Bristol, England Posts: 9,088	Never tried coffee.

04-11-2012, 09:59 PM	#2100
Zoombie Hwee kaptoored eet for kayhosssssss Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Eye of Terror Posts: 36,635	Same here. Also, never tried beer, weed or fags. Well, there was this one really cute guy... __________________ Shattered Sky: Draft 6, done! Worldshard: 85,000/85,000 (Draft 1: DONE!) River⁷: 25,000/??,000 words Read my blog: Quantum Spin Plates Tweets from the Future: Follow my characters. BUY MY BOOK HERE!

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