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D.K.T. Registered Joined Jun 25, 2012 Messages 3 Reaction score 1 Apr 29, 2013 #1 deleted Last edited: Jul 1, 2013
MadelineButterfly Lost my muse in a poker game. Super Member Registered Joined Apr 24, 2013 Messages 105 Reaction score 3 Location In a corner, nose to the wall, thinking about what Apr 29, 2013 #2 Hello and welcome! Are you wanting a critique? If so, I would recommend moving this to the poetry critique forum. I think those that offer critiques are more likely to find it there. http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=85 However, I will say this has very vivid descriptions and a touching story. I enjoyed it greatly. Thanks for posting! MB
Hello and welcome! Are you wanting a critique? If so, I would recommend moving this to the poetry critique forum. I think those that offer critiques are more likely to find it there. http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=85 However, I will say this has very vivid descriptions and a touching story. I enjoyed it greatly. Thanks for posting! MB
