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Old 01-14-2007, 12:46 AM   #3226
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Old 01-14-2007, 12:51 AM   #3227
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Ganesha did it so much better. I withdraw my last line. Use her's instead.
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Old 01-14-2007, 01:14 AM   #3228
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Old 01-14-2007, 01:32 AM   #3229
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so much more needed
in persuit of happiness
than past ghosts of joy
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Old 01-14-2007, 02:05 AM   #3230
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Old 01-14-2007, 02:06 AM   #3231
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calling me to sea
to wash away all my sin
and leave me hollow
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Old 01-14-2007, 02:12 AM   #3232
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and leave me hollow
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tender fragile life
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Old 01-14-2007, 02:16 AM   #3233
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tender, fragile life
broken, splintered, smashed mirror
seen through deathly eyes
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Old 01-14-2007, 02:26 AM   #3234
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Old 01-14-2007, 02:27 AM   #3235
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how to renew me?
this persona grown so old,
withered like a plum
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Old 01-14-2007, 04:00 AM   #3236
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mother sits close to the fire
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Old 01-14-2007, 06:04 AM   #3237
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Old 01-14-2007, 08:48 AM   #3238
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anticipating the law
jailbird starts to sing
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Old 01-14-2007, 06:20 PM   #3239
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Old 01-14-2007, 07:15 PM   #3240
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Old 01-14-2007, 08:40 PM   #3241
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Old 01-14-2007, 10:46 PM   #3242
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Old 01-14-2007, 11:54 PM   #3243
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Old 01-15-2007, 01:33 AM   #3244
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