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English Rose
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Join Date: Mar 2006
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it's your point of view
but I have to disagree I believe we're lost
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Cath www.cathsmith.com "Many and various, strange and multitudinous are the friends that befriend me in this world, yet I never found one false or that did not surpass me in some virtue." Wilfred Owen in a letter home.
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
Posts: 7,718
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I belive we're lost
when I have not heard your voice in twenty four hours
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Primum non nocere
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: the western sky
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in twenty four hours
I can lose twenty six pounds (I'm paid to say that)
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. There's more to living than only surviving Maybe I'm not there, but I'm still trying .................................................. ..........-- Dexter Holland |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
Posts: 7,718
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I'm paid to say that
I want you but I want more than you can afford
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con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Vermont
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than you can afford; desire, is your master taste to touch-too much
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If I'd had more time, I'd have written a shorter letter. Mark Twain |
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caramello, per favore
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: upstate NY
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Taste to touch - too much
wasabi on your fingers; bathe my skin in milk
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Therese Walsh Author of The Last Will of Moira Leahy ThereseWalsh.com Writer Unboxed 101 Best Websites, Writer's Digest '07, '08, '09 & '10 |
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has a lopsided smile.
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: in a galaxy far, far away
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Bathe my skin in milk
soak me in collagen soup all this to deny time |
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English Rose
AW Moderator
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Here. Somewhere. Probably.
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all to deny time
that gracious benefactor wisdom quickly lost
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Cath www.cathsmith.com "Many and various, strange and multitudinous are the friends that befriend me in this world, yet I never found one false or that did not surpass me in some virtue." Wilfred Owen in a letter home.
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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wisdom quickly lost
flutters and is gone; wont you take me on your flight?
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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caramello, per favore
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: upstate NY
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Take me on your flight
Wrists lashed to your gypsy beard over Everest
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Therese Walsh Author of The Last Will of Moira Leahy ThereseWalsh.com Writer Unboxed 101 Best Websites, Writer's Digest '07, '08, '09 & '10 |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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over everest
no oxygen, thin and gaunt but still I breathe you
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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musker vyusher
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: honorary Tennessean - Thanks to Alleycat
Posts: 848
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but still I breathe you
Your scent, your essence, your life, satisfying me
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Yes... the avatar is not me. It is Audrey Hepburn. WIP Early Frost - Novel. Rewrite underway. 17 chapters of rewrite and counting. World building being researched intently.
A Black and White Man - Pierrot and Red Riding Hood ganging up on me. Notes, research, and a short story so obscure no one understands it. |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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satisfying me
has become your obsession like lust is hatered
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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musker vyusher
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: honorary Tennessean - Thanks to Alleycat
Posts: 848
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Like lust is hatred
All consuming passions That people kill for
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Yes... the avatar is not me. It is Audrey Hepburn. WIP Early Frost - Novel. Rewrite underway. 17 chapters of rewrite and counting. World building being researched intently.
A Black and White Man - Pierrot and Red Riding Hood ganging up on me. Notes, research, and a short story so obscure no one understands it. |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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that people kill for
their religion and riches I don't understand
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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musker vyusher
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: honorary Tennessean - Thanks to Alleycat
Posts: 848
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I don't understand
It passes beyond my grasp Out of my mind's reach
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Yes... the avatar is not me. It is Audrey Hepburn. WIP Early Frost - Novel. Rewrite underway. 17 chapters of rewrite and counting. World building being researched intently.
A Black and White Man - Pierrot and Red Riding Hood ganging up on me. Notes, research, and a short story so obscure no one understands it. |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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out of my mind's reach
beyond my comprehension confused and puzzled
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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musker vyusher
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: honorary Tennessean - Thanks to Alleycat
Posts: 848
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Confused and puzzled
As voices shatter my peace What did I do now?
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Yes... the avatar is not me. It is Audrey Hepburn. WIP Early Frost - Novel. Rewrite underway. 17 chapters of rewrite and counting. World building being researched intently.
A Black and White Man - Pierrot and Red Riding Hood ganging up on me. Notes, research, and a short story so obscure no one understands it. |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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What did I do now?
words I always find myself uttering wildly
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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musker vyusher
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: honorary Tennessean - Thanks to Alleycat
Posts: 848
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![]() Uttering wildly The words that make it better 'Please," "I'm so sorry"
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Yes... the avatar is not me. It is Audrey Hepburn. WIP Early Frost - Novel. Rewrite underway. 17 chapters of rewrite and counting. World building being researched intently.
A Black and White Man - Pierrot and Red Riding Hood ganging up on me. Notes, research, and a short story so obscure no one understands it. |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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please, I'm so sorry
come back to me, requit my from your closed arms
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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musker vyusher
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: honorary Tennessean - Thanks to Alleycat
Posts: 848
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From your closed arms
My thoughts fled first, then my heart Seeking my freedom
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Yes... the avatar is not me. It is Audrey Hepburn. WIP Early Frost - Novel. Rewrite underway. 17 chapters of rewrite and counting. World building being researched intently.
A Black and White Man - Pierrot and Red Riding Hood ganging up on me. Notes, research, and a short story so obscure no one understands it. |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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seeking my freedom
in illicit substances unleashed what's within
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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musker vyusher
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: honorary Tennessean - Thanks to Alleycat
Posts: 848
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(Whew! slow down!)
Unleashed what's within The 'id', the inner monster free to create chaos
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Yes... the avatar is not me. It is Audrey Hepburn. WIP Early Frost - Novel. Rewrite underway. 17 chapters of rewrite and counting. World building being researched intently.
A Black and White Man - Pierrot and Red Riding Hood ganging up on me. Notes, research, and a short story so obscure no one understands it. |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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free to create chaos
havoc in my cranium damn this alcohol
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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