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caramello, per favore
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: upstate NY
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Be my god of love,
and I, Caer, will be your swan; feel my downy white
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con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Vermont
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If I'd had more time, I'd have written a shorter letter. Mark Twain |
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caramello, per favore
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Swan singing sonnet
three quatrains about love's death Master Shakespeare nods
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Therese Walsh Author of The Last Will of Moira Leahy ThereseWalsh.com Writer Unboxed 101 Best Websites, Writer's Digest '07, '08, '09 & '10 |
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King of Sloth Town
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: in exile
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Master Shakespeare nods
his words spoken by others in lives showing truths
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caramello, per favore
Join Date: Sep 2006
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in lives showing truths
pull your boots on, take a leap forget boundaries
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con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist
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forget boundaries
old woman yelled at the fish flash of gold faded
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If I'd had more time, I'd have written a shorter letter. Mark Twain |
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King of Sloth Town
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: in exile
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flash of gold faded
while dreams of riches riding currents flow away
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con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist
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currents flow away
lives lost, love longing to become wait my arrival
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If I'd had more time, I'd have written a shorter letter. Mark Twain |
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caramello, per favore
Join Date: Sep 2006
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Wait my arrival.
Stay close in the corner, there, shrouded in darkness
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Therese Walsh Author of The Last Will of Moira Leahy ThereseWalsh.com Writer Unboxed 101 Best Websites, Writer's Digest '07, '08, '09 & '10 |
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con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist
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shrouded in darkness
velvet's whispered rustling embraced breathlessly
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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embraced breathlessly
a leap into the unknown telling your future
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King of Sloth Town
Join Date: Feb 2006
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telling your future
you swallow each word spoken truths are lies believed
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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after bitter storms
rain's frangrant breeze lifts my hope the world is washed clean
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Because EYE said so!
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: In my head.
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Satire, Sarcasm, Hyperbole, Comedic Social Comment, Levity; Smileys, Rolling on Floor, Big Grins, and other Emoticons created specifically to indicate the "spirit" of a post... - It's important to understand these before taking anything or anyone too seriously. Especially around here.
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
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acid rain of spring
burns my already sour eyes with a sugar sting
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Because EYE said so!
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: In my head.
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Satire, Sarcasm, Hyperbole, Comedic Social Comment, Levity; Smileys, Rolling on Floor, Big Grins, and other Emoticons created specifically to indicate the "spirit" of a post... - It's important to understand these before taking anything or anyone too seriously. Especially around here.
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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giving life to pain
a baby's cries announces all was not in vain
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: UK
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All was not in vain-
the tears, the costly lawyers- I have half the house. |
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One of the most important people in the world
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Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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I have half the house -
half a life in half a world wanting to be whole
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Because EYE said so!
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: In my head.
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Satire, Sarcasm, Hyperbole, Comedic Social Comment, Levity; Smileys, Rolling on Floor, Big Grins, and other Emoticons created specifically to indicate the "spirit" of a post... - It's important to understand these before taking anything or anyone too seriously. Especially around here.
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caramello, per favore
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: upstate NY
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Past islands of thought
sink, like Atlantis, leaving naught but salted truth OR Past Islands of thought sink, like Atlantis, leaving nothing but the sea I prefer the first but the second may be easier to work with.
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Therese Walsh Author of The Last Will of Moira Leahy ThereseWalsh.com Writer Unboxed 101 Best Websites, Writer's Digest '07, '08, '09 & '10 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: UK
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Nothing but the sea.
Why did I fall asleep in This bloody rowboat? |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: UK
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(and not that I want to encourage branching off, but:
Naught but salted truth: I found the meaning of life In a bag of chips.) |
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caramello, per favore
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: upstate NY
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In a bag of chips
lay my father's leaden hand. On his face, a smile.
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