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Old 04-18-2007, 07:10 AM   #3651
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Old 04-18-2007, 08:28 AM   #3652
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Old 04-18-2007, 09:51 PM   #3653
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three quatrains about love's death
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Old 04-18-2007, 10:51 PM   #3654
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Old 04-20-2007, 03:35 AM   #3655
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pull your boots on, take a leap
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Old 04-20-2007, 04:20 AM   #3656
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old woman yelled at the fish
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Old 04-20-2007, 06:25 AM   #3657
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Old 04-20-2007, 07:11 AM   #3658
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Old 04-20-2007, 06:17 PM   #3659
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Wait my arrival.
Stay close in the corner, there,
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Old 04-20-2007, 07:22 PM   #3660
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velvet's whispered rustling
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Old 04-21-2007, 08:13 AM   #3661
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Old 04-21-2007, 08:57 AM   #3662
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Old 04-21-2007, 09:39 AM   #3663
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truths are lies believed
rose petals soon decay
after bitter storms
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Old 04-22-2007, 04:05 AM   #3664
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after bitter storms
rain's frangrant breeze lifts my hope
the world is washed clean
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Old 04-22-2007, 07:35 AM   #3665
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Old 04-22-2007, 07:38 AM   #3666
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acid rain of spring
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Old 04-22-2007, 07:52 AM   #3667
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Old 04-22-2007, 08:44 AM   #3668
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Old 04-22-2007, 09:02 AM   #3669
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Old 04-22-2007, 09:12 AM   #3670
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Old 04-24-2007, 11:33 PM   #3672
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Past islands of thought
sink, like Atlantis, leaving
naught but salted truth

OR

Past Islands of thought
sink, like Atlantis, leaving
nothing but the sea

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Old 04-24-2007, 11:42 PM   #3673
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On his face, a smile.
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