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Old 10-22-2008, 11:20 AM   #4626
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Donkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
structurally sound
unrelenting and profound
the wisest prose is
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Old 10-24-2008, 05:39 AM   #4627
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Teena is a splendid one to beholdTeena is a splendid one to beholdTeena is a splendid one to behold
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Old 10-24-2008, 06:09 AM   #4628
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Donkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
written by poets
critiqued by both gods and men
we stand corrected
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Old 10-24-2008, 06:20 AM   #4629
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Old 10-24-2008, 05:46 PM   #4630
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Old 10-25-2008, 08:10 AM   #4631
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Old 10-25-2008, 09:09 AM   #4632
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Old 10-26-2008, 10:59 PM   #4633
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Old 10-27-2008, 01:12 AM   #4634
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Old 10-27-2008, 08:03 AM   #4635
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kdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
rainbows multiplied
through prisms; the sun captured
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Old 10-27-2008, 10:51 AM   #4636
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colorfully sliced
stained glass ribbons of sunset
light my way to God
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Old 10-28-2008, 04:56 AM   #4637
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kdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
light my way to God
darkness surrounds this old world
speak only the truth
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Old 10-31-2008, 06:17 AM   #4638
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Old 10-31-2008, 10:20 AM   #4639
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Utopian dreams
castles resting in the clouds
princess beckoning
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Old 11-01-2008, 06:29 PM   #4640
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kdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskdnxdr is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
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loneliness laughs loud
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Old 11-01-2008, 10:46 PM   #4641
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Loneliness laughs loud
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Old 11-02-2008, 07:05 AM   #4642
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Old 11-02-2008, 07:23 AM   #4643
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into the still air
coyotes sing a searching song
notes lost to the stars
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Old 11-03-2008, 05:16 AM   #4644
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notes lost to the stars
but her violin still weeps
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Old 11-03-2008, 05:29 AM   #4645
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with the chords of night
soulful hymns tell old stories
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Old 11-03-2008, 09:22 AM   #4646
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faith, hope and love abound
a promise kept, perfectly
temptation denied
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Old 11-03-2008, 09:38 AM   #4647
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Old 11-10-2008, 08:28 AM   #4648
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Old 11-10-2008, 11:50 PM   #4649
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together they die
apart they will but suffer
classic, tragic love
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