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Old 12-09-2008, 05:10 PM   #4701
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Woof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsWoof is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
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Old 12-09-2008, 07:06 PM   #4702
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Old 12-09-2008, 10:26 PM   #4703
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wayward souls succeed
in haunting familiar spots
the exorcist comes
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Old 12-09-2008, 11:05 PM   #4704
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drachin8 leaves trails of profuse coolnessdrachin8 leaves trails of profuse coolnessdrachin8 leaves trails of profuse coolnessdrachin8 leaves trails of profuse coolnessdrachin8 leaves trails of profuse coolness
the exorcist comes
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Old 12-10-2008, 12:43 AM   #4705
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Donkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
finger on your cheek
collecting your salty tears
soothing words, white lies
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Old 12-10-2008, 04:59 AM   #4706
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soothing words, white lies
keep me hooked; feeding love
as a starved dog begs
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Old 12-10-2008, 07:09 AM   #4707
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as a starved dog begs
urchins shove for place, for love
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Old 12-10-2008, 08:11 AM   #4708
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Old 12-10-2008, 10:36 AM   #4709
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feline fantasy
a perfect place to stretch out
basking in the warmth
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Old 12-10-2008, 05:01 PM   #4710
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Godfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudge
basking in the warmth,
that smile she lent me when she
thought of then and me
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Old 12-10-2008, 05:57 PM   #4711
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thought of then and me
and of now and you and us
all thoughts turn to love
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Old 12-10-2008, 07:29 PM   #4712
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all thoughts turn to love
In the spring of our short lives
each day is a gift
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Old 12-10-2008, 08:46 PM   #4713
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each day is a gift
wrapped in paper, winter-thin
don't open 'til spring




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Old 12-10-2008, 10:09 PM   #4714
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Old 12-11-2008, 12:35 AM   #4715
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and they obey her
and in obedience grow
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Old 12-11-2008, 12:39 AM   #4716
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and they obey her
because she helps them to grow
mother, nurture that
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Old 12-11-2008, 06:00 PM   #4717
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(bridging the two previous haiku!)

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Old 12-11-2008, 08:04 PM   #4718
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sequins glitter, feathers flash
the strip is aglow




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Old 12-11-2008, 08:12 PM   #4719
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the strip is aglow
wagered mortgage not humble
as paradise lost
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Old 12-12-2008, 02:20 AM   #4720
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Old 12-12-2008, 03:57 AM   #4721
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Old 12-12-2008, 05:22 AM   #4722
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are we even now?
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when "keep it real" daunts
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Old 12-12-2008, 07:14 AM   #4723
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when "keep it real" daunts
kick the can in empty streets
walking down the dark
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Old 12-12-2008, 06:07 PM   #4724
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Old 12-13-2008, 12:20 AM   #4725
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