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Old 12-18-2008, 06:15 AM   #4751
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who needs clean dishes,
the one who dreams of hot soup
bread, cheese and apples?
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Old 12-18-2008, 07:47 AM   #4752
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moldy, green, and mushy black
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Old 12-18-2008, 07:53 AM   #4753
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poor fare for the poor
hopelessness, no escape now
mercy is their friend
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Old 12-18-2008, 07:56 AM   #4754
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Old 12-18-2008, 06:23 PM   #4755
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Old 12-18-2008, 10:37 PM   #4756
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Old 12-18-2008, 11:11 PM   #4757
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dreams and visions come alive
mind and matter mesh
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Old 12-18-2008, 11:20 PM   #4758
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Old 12-19-2008, 07:11 AM   #4759
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Old 12-19-2008, 07:13 AM   #4760
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Is that all we are?
Those news stories, sad mistakes?
Let the inside out!
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Old 12-19-2008, 09:52 PM   #4761
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let the inside out
though i really must tell you
a liver lacks looks
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Old 12-19-2008, 09:56 PM   #4762
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a fiver runs through't
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Old 12-19-2008, 10:12 PM   #4763
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a fiver runs through't
for love was her currency
you'll pay for that kiss
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Old 12-19-2008, 10:38 PM   #4764
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Old 12-20-2008, 03:09 AM   #4765
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as long as you live
never forget kindness paid
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Old 12-20-2008, 03:26 AM   #4766
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Old 12-20-2008, 03:40 AM   #4767
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Old 12-20-2008, 05:24 PM   #4768
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you smile wickedly
"that's no guitar in your hand,"
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Old 12-23-2008, 09:21 AM   #4769
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Old 12-23-2008, 10:21 PM   #4770
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wanting to be pure
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Old 12-24-2008, 12:01 AM   #4771
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but the beast claimed her
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til the Lord's light shone
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Old 12-25-2008, 08:20 AM   #4773
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Old 12-25-2008, 08:28 AM   #4774
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