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Old 02-07-2009, 01:03 AM   #5051
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Donkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
on sunlit flowers
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Old 02-07-2009, 01:14 AM   #5052
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Old 02-07-2009, 01:17 AM   #5053
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Old 02-07-2009, 01:34 AM   #5054
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Old 02-07-2009, 02:23 AM   #5055
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where pride has it's way in me
narcissistic love
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Old 02-07-2009, 02:40 AM   #5056
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Old 02-07-2009, 03:57 AM   #5057
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image and spirit
like firestorm and smoke or
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Old 02-07-2009, 06:52 AM   #5058
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Old 02-07-2009, 07:20 AM   #5059
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what wood stokes the fire?
she said as her body heat
stoked his hot stove pipe

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Old 02-07-2009, 07:35 AM   #5060
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Old 02-07-2009, 09:49 AM   #5061
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That blood pooled beneath.
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Old 02-07-2009, 10:21 AM   #5062
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That blood pooled beneath
my other lover cools fast
as I walk the walk
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Old 02-07-2009, 10:29 AM   #5063
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Old 02-07-2009, 08:52 PM   #5064
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won't follow my lead?
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Old 02-07-2009, 09:11 PM   #5065
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Old 02-08-2009, 06:57 AM   #5066
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Old 02-08-2009, 07:24 AM   #5067
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Old 02-08-2009, 09:47 PM   #5068
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she's finally here
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meow meow I say
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which is no surprise because
I ate a condor
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