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Old 02-25-2009, 06:51 PM   #5151
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Donkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsDonkey is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
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Old 02-25-2009, 11:15 PM   #5152
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Old 02-26-2009, 04:19 AM   #5153
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Old 02-26-2009, 05:02 AM   #5154
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Old 02-26-2009, 06:19 AM   #5155
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Old 02-26-2009, 07:17 AM   #5156
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fate sealed, I gasp and then cry
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:13 AM   #5157
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my time is fleeting
for a mere mortal am I
the cycle's end nears
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Old 02-26-2009, 09:18 AM   #5158
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Old 02-26-2009, 04:17 PM   #5159
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broken chain, ecstasy~pain
watch the empty nest
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Old 02-26-2009, 04:31 PM   #5160
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Old 02-27-2009, 01:04 AM   #5161
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Old 02-27-2009, 07:40 AM   #5162
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free to try their wings
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set your mouth on fire
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Old 02-27-2009, 11:22 AM   #5163
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Old 02-28-2009, 07:34 PM   #5164
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craving the next kiss
dust settles in my old mouth
remembering still
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Old 03-01-2009, 12:28 AM   #5165
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remembering still
the touch of my love's soft lips
her tongue's light caress
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Old 03-01-2009, 12:32 AM   #5166
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her tongue's light caress
licking probing and lapping
man she likes ice cream
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Old 03-01-2009, 01:09 AM   #5167
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man she likes ice cream
she'll kill for some rocky road
tasty, yet deadly
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Old 03-01-2009, 02:32 AM   #5168
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tasty, yet deadly
lust is yummy bitter sweet
kill the crave young one
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Old 03-03-2009, 12:46 AM   #5169
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kill the crave young one
were replaced by 'let it go'
next a gentle thought
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Old 03-03-2009, 03:50 AM   #5170
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violence, peace now
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Old 03-03-2009, 04:42 PM   #5171
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in conflict with each other
mind and heart embrace
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