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Old 07-06-2009, 06:14 AM   #5401
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Old 07-10-2009, 01:21 AM   #5402
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Old 07-10-2009, 03:03 PM   #5403
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Old 07-14-2009, 07:41 AM   #5404
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Old 07-17-2009, 07:38 AM   #5405
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Old 07-18-2009, 06:49 AM   #5406
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Old 07-18-2009, 04:01 PM   #5407
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Beyondian is better than ice cream with hot fudgeBeyondian is better than ice cream with hot fudgeBeyondian is better than ice cream with hot fudgeBeyondian is better than ice cream with hot fudgeBeyondian is better than ice cream with hot fudgeBeyondian is better than ice cream with hot fudgeBeyondian is better than ice cream with hot fudge
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Old 07-18-2009, 09:58 PM   #5408
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Old 07-20-2009, 07:51 AM   #5409
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Old 07-20-2009, 08:50 AM   #5410
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Old 07-20-2009, 02:53 PM   #5411
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toward new destinations
Cardboard airplanes float across
The static ocean
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Old 07-21-2009, 07:12 AM   #5412
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the static ocean
lies placid and deceiving
doldrums lure to sleep
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Old 07-21-2009, 11:16 PM   #5413
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Old 07-22-2009, 06:55 AM   #5414
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lean into the wind
and whisper softly secrets
that erode your heart
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Old 07-23-2009, 01:03 AM   #5415
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that erode your heart
while all suckle from the world's failures
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Old 07-23-2009, 06:57 AM   #5416
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your mind that erodes:
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Old 07-23-2009, 07:23 AM   #5417
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Old 07-25-2009, 01:40 PM   #5418
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Almond, Benzoin, Dandelion
Dry. Fragrantly dead
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Old 07-27-2009, 04:54 AM   #5419
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Old 07-28-2009, 01:27 AM   #5420
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Old 07-29-2009, 06:38 AM   #5421
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Old 07-30-2009, 03:36 AM   #5422
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Through hell you must travel
Taste the flames of damnation
To understand peace
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Old 07-30-2009, 06:26 AM   #5423
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surrender your intentions
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Old 07-30-2009, 05:05 PM   #5425
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Know them as equals
Hold them to your chest tightly
Then let the stars go
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