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Old 05-07-2010, 06:50 PM   #6151
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Old 05-07-2010, 07:21 PM   #6152
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Old 05-07-2010, 09:58 PM   #6154
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Old 05-07-2010, 10:57 PM   #6155
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Old 05-08-2010, 04:03 AM   #6156
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What is the secret?
Something that ends if it’s shared.
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Old 05-08-2010, 04:15 AM   #6157
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Old 05-08-2010, 04:17 AM   #6158
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Old 05-08-2010, 04:59 AM   #6159
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Perfectly, it's yours
The relentless hours which mock
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Old 05-08-2010, 06:28 AM   #6160
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your every bated breath
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Old 05-08-2010, 09:01 AM   #6161
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Lost in love's refrain.
The frogs keep us up all night.
One of summer’s joys.
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Old 05-09-2010, 05:08 AM   #6163
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Cool rain tomorrow?
My wilting garden’s staring
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Old 05-09-2010, 11:48 AM   #6164
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Old 05-10-2010, 08:36 AM   #6166
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Old 05-11-2010, 04:36 AM   #6167
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This, my perfect day
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Old 05-12-2010, 07:37 PM   #6171
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Silken tulips rest.
Tomorrow blooms will open.
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