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Old 02-16-2012, 10:23 AM   #7901
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Old 02-16-2012, 02:40 PM   #7902
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Old 02-16-2012, 04:27 PM   #7903
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Visions to believe,
I've seen them with my own eyes
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Old 02-17-2012, 01:47 AM   #7904
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Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
behind neon lights
minds tinker and tingle
flicker, then go dark
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Old 02-17-2012, 03:17 AM   #7905
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Flicker then go, dark
idea of infinite
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Old 02-17-2012, 07:57 AM   #7906
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Infidelities
accumulate in the genes --
a fuse-lit darkness.
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Old 02-17-2012, 08:13 AM   #7907
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Old 02-17-2012, 08:17 AM   #7908
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Enclosing the night,
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Old 02-17-2012, 01:36 PM   #7909
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Old 02-17-2012, 04:10 PM   #7910
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Peaceful is now pleased;
his dog dish is reticent
until his spoon howls.

I'm an old man; I'm confused.
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Old 02-17-2012, 06:24 PM   #7911
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Until his spoon howls
he'll stand next to that cold dish;
the scoop of the day.
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Old 02-18-2012, 08:19 AM   #7912
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The scoop of the day:
once more night guy left a mess --
morning guy cleans up.
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Old 02-18-2012, 10:30 PM   #7913
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Funeral crashers
offer: their shoulders to cry,
abstinence from death.
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Old 02-18-2012, 11:47 PM   #7914
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Abstinence from death
would leave us with the same stiff
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Old 02-19-2012, 02:03 AM   #7915
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Flowers forever
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Old 02-19-2012, 03:29 AM   #7916
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Well fertilized,
bad habits thrust their shoots through
the thick loam of guilt.
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Old 02-19-2012, 03:37 AM   #7917
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Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
the thick loam of guilt
is thinly spread on the death
bed of obsession
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Old 02-19-2012, 11:26 PM   #7918
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bed of obsession
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Old 02-19-2012, 11:57 PM   #7919
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Blazing lust fufilled
from sneaking the last hors d'oeuvre,
I snack on guilt, too.
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Old 02-20-2012, 12:13 AM   #7920
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I snack on guilt, too
full of old doughnut holes
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Old 02-20-2012, 12:17 AM   #7921
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To hold my pleasure,
I prefer a slow romance,
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Old 02-21-2012, 09:45 PM   #7922
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or ... lots of duct tape
fastened in the right fashion
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Old 02-21-2012, 10:24 PM   #7923
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Old 02-22-2012, 06:26 AM   #7924
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and, make her feel alright -
the gentle press of lips so warm
searching for the heart
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Old 02-22-2012, 07:40 AM   #7925
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Searching for the heart --
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