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Old 07-26-2006, 10:30 PM   #1451
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Godfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudge
rock-a-bye baby
don't fall from the worlds treetop,
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Old 07-26-2006, 10:40 PM   #1452
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Old 07-26-2006, 11:01 PM   #1453
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be like a willow,
bend to the changes, and live.
or be a proud oak
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Old 07-26-2006, 11:32 PM   #1454
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...or be a proud oak
I heard the pine tree whisper
What for? I don't know
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Old 07-27-2006, 01:23 AM   #1455
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standing wet in the raw wind.
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Old 07-27-2006, 01:41 AM   #1456
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Alive, breath catches
gasping for air I am free
of you and your cage
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Old 07-27-2006, 01:51 AM   #1457
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of you and your cage
that is all you speak about
every day and night
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:00 AM   #1458
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every day and night
I speak of my cage waiting
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:13 AM   #1459
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for you to free me
I'd have to wait forever
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:26 AM   #1460
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so i'll free myself
your words light my pathway
a gift sung in key
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:29 AM   #1461
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a gift sung in key
changed my whole life forever -
they call me angel
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:34 AM   #1462
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they call me angel
rusty halo tells a tale
devil's redemption
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:38 AM   #1463
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devil's redemption
is more for the sinful gods
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:53 AM   #1464
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let me rule in hell
gathering darkness to set
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:55 AM   #1465
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angels on their guard
I can't help but wonder though
why God needs sentries
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Old 07-27-2006, 04:08 AM   #1466
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why God needs sentries
it helps small souls feel needed
no hand left idle
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Old 07-27-2006, 04:14 AM   #1467
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no hand left idle
in the wake of disaster;
humanity groans
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Old 07-27-2006, 07:30 AM   #1468
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Beneath, the earth breathes.
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Old 07-27-2006, 10:22 AM   #1469
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Beneath, the earth breathes
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Old 07-27-2006, 10:29 AM   #1470
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ride them as they break
hearts and minds are so fragile
worthless if coddled
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Old 07-27-2006, 11:39 AM   #1471
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Old 07-27-2006, 12:06 PM   #1472
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Old 07-27-2006, 12:26 PM   #1473
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knows no ambition
the daily trek is enough
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