dialect
reph said:
Here's a problem for writers who haven't lived in enough places or didn't pay attention to the details of speech where they were. How is one to determine what other dialect fits in the same class as "get ahold"? To me, "get ahold" sounds normal, not dialectal, though it does sound colloquial and a bit old-fashioned. What dialectal expressions go with it?
For example, do the same people who say "get ahold" use "was (were) to" for "went to"? My mother used to write that she "was to Fresno yesterday." No one I know now uses "was" that way. People say "I've never been to Fresno," but they don't use the past tense of "to be" with that meaning.
To be perfectly honest, I don't know. Having a character stay in consistent dialect is probably one of the toughest things to do in fiction, unless the dialect is your own. I do my best to research regional dialect, and to get in enough for flavor. The main thing, I think, is to not use dialect inconsistent with a region, rather than trying to get in all the dialect that is common to a region. This means not having a midwestern country boy use a phrase common to a California valley girl.
But it is tough, and people travel and relocate a great deal more than they did only a couple of generations ago, and dialect is becoming a mixed bag of tricks. Reading regional writers helps, and online research can help, though what would help more would be if a few more websites knew the difference between dialect and accent.
But it's tough, and I think the best we can do is to be as consistent as possible, and to not violate dialect, even if we can't always get it right.
Some words are especially tough, and for me, at least "ahold" is one of them. It's about as close to a "betwixt and betweener" as any word I know. I think it is dialect, it is a colloquilism, but it is also, I think, a genuine word. For me, this means I have to play it by ear. Does it sound right to have a particular character use it? Doe sit have the same flavor, the same pattern, as his speech in general?
But it's tough, and this is probably one of those cases where using a given word is wrong if it sounds wrong, and probbaly right if it sounds right, to a given writer's ear and experience.